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• Mar 15, 2015

Alright!

While you wait, you can peek at my revised chapter one?

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• Mar 15, 2015

Yeah, we need to make it even more intense now! Let's go!

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• Mar 15, 2015

Yes, they are!

Yay! ^-^

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  Myst

• Mar 15, 2015

Ohh, I see.

Alright. Maybe make an announcement or something?

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• Mar 15, 2015

Yeah... it's pitiful, really.

XD

Btw, would Suzuya go crazy on Jasper? Should Jasper leave by himself?

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• Mar 15, 2015

Poor Daniel and poor Alice. It seems like they just found each other when they died~

*squeals* Hehe.

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• Mar 15, 2015

Aww... so sad. </3

Eek! Then do it!

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• Mar 15, 2015

Does Daniel wish he listened to Jasper? XD

Haha, niice.

ooooh, yay!

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• Mar 15, 2015

Yay!

You're welcome!

Mmmm... can't wait.

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• Mar 15, 2015

*giggles*

Aww... you're so sweet!

He's awesome! Where will he show the video?

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• Mar 15, 2015

*squeals from excitement*

Aww... thanks. *hugs*

No worries. It's perfect the way it is.

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• Mar 15, 2015

EXCITEMENT BUG AGAIN! X'D

I'm so proud of the new version of chapter one. I know you'll love it too. ;3

Aww... it's okay! I LIKED IT!

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  Taka

• Mar 15, 2015

Oh, I forgot to tell you that Yuki is the character I'd have an easier time parting with if somebody is gonna die, just sayin'. Also wow, Suzaya is pretty, uh, troubled.

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• Mar 15, 2015

Alright! SO MUCH EXCITEMENT!

When you do, let me know. :3

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• Mar 15, 2015

Just finished editing chapter one! ^_^

http://www.wattpad.com/107171952-permissible-genocide-chapter-one

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• Mar 15, 2015

Oh, my... just posted...

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• Mar 15, 2015

Shanked?

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• Mar 15, 2015

Oh, um, sure... maybe a bit later.

YES! SO EXCITED!

It's turning out to be SO good that my original version looks like **** in comparison.

Chapter One is at 1946 words so far.

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• Mar 15, 2015

YES! Because I love Scarlett and I have some pictures of her ready!

YES! YES, IT IS!

I will. Chapter One is becoming twice as long as it originally was because of all the detail I'm adding.

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• Mar 15, 2015

Hm... I might bring back Scarlett then. (She's a character from a story of mine that I really love.)

YES!
No worries. ^-^

Hehe, niice!

Btw, I'm editing my clone story/Permissible Genocide to add in more details and bring the characters even more to life. I can let you know when I'm done editing if you want.