The Pennifer

The Pennifer

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  • hestu
    Hey Penn, congrats on getting first place in the poetry contest, you deserved it! I really enjoyed how your poem incorporated all the sights and sounds of a fair; it really took me back to my childhood, and made me remember how perfectly magical fairs can be. :) I could tell just by reading it how dedicated you were to writing such a wonderful piece, and I'm really glad that your hard work paid off. Have a good day, Penn!!!
    ZetaFunction
    Congrats on winning the poetry contest!
    My favorite part of the poem is how descriptive and vivid it is; while I read it, I could clearly see and feel everything that was happening. It was as if I was there eating an Elephant Ear myself!
    Shinrai
    Congratulations on winning the poetry contest!
    This line I guess best suits this years' bell tree fair!

    "I am free to further wander now. Take in the sounds and sights
    The warm Fair air reverberates with music in the night
    I find some neon glow sticks that I wear with childish pride
    As I mingle with the happy crowd I'm deeply satisfied."
    SharJoY
    What struck me as I was reading your poem was how it was written in a way that made me feel as though I was that girl at the fair and experiencing everything at that moment. Most especially when I read this part:
    "I gaze at it in pleasure, at its fragrant warm perfection
    Then I take a bite of heaven from this wondrous Fair confection.
    There's nothing left but crumbs now as I rise up from my seat
    I sigh with sweet contentment, with my appetite replete."

    Congrats Pen!
    Sunday_Rose
    Congrats on winning the poetry section in the fair! I loved your poem and how you incorporated treats with the fair and the journey of it :)
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