2nd Pixel art: Undyne critique pls

[axo]

Since you guys seemed to like my first pixel art, I decided to make another. She didn't come out very well but Im still pretty proud of her

 

[teto]

I think she looks great!

undertaaaale <3

 

[cherriielle]

Looks great to me!
The only critique I would have for you is the make the hair a bit more 'flowy', because it kind of goes straight for a bit then drops off.
Giving it more of a curve will be a bit more natural. Keep it up!

(also you forgot her eyepatch, but that might have just been a choice...)

 

[axo]

Looks great to me!
The only critique I would have for you is the make the hair a bit more 'flowy', because it kind of goes straight for a bit then drops off.
Giving it more of a curve will be a bit more natural. Keep it up!

(also you forgot her eyepatch, but that might have just been a choice...)

Yeah, about her eyepatch xD.... I didnt want to make it too big, but if the eyepatch wasnt big enough, the string wouldnt look right, I experimented with it but decided in the end to leave it out lol

 

[cherriielle]

Yeah, about her eyepatch xD.... I didnt want to make it too big, but if the eyepatch wasnt big enough, the string wouldnt look right, I experimented with it but decided in the end to leave it out lol

Ah yeah, thinking about it, it wouldn't work too well with pixel art. (especially when you're using large pixels)