JabuJabule
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Kip inspired me to write out my story, instead of doing it in comic form.
Chapter One:
On a side note...I don't think I formatted it correctly...but either way, enjoy!
Chapter One:
“A fresh start…a new town.”I think, as I step off a big, yellow, school-looking bus. Waving goodbye to the driver Kapp’n, he drives off. I look towards the town, and my jaw drops in amazement. Big trees, lush grass, streams filling the village.
“Just what I wanted!” I say, as I jump off the bus stop. Fixing my glasses and looking forward, I see a yellow duck sleeping under a rather large pine tree. Closing my eyes with a smile on my face, I start walking over.
However, I suddenly feel the dirt beneath my foot fall in.
However, I suddenly feel the dirt beneath my foot fall in.
“Holy cra-“I yell, falling in. Hurt pretty badly, I just lay face first in the hole. I close my eyes, and hopefully wake up from the nonexistent dream I’m having. Suddenly, I hear footsteps above me, and I feel something with feathers grab my ankle. It quickly lifts me from the hole, and up to his face. I see my glasses still in the hole.
“Um…I’m Jared. Nice to meet ya!” I say nervously. He quickly flips me in the air, and grabs me by the waist.
“I’m Pierce, nice to meet you too!” the eagle says, smiling. Putting me down, he says “Your hair didn’t survive the crash landing, did it? Ha!”
“Nope, it didn’t…” I say, trying to fix back to the spike it once was.
“Why don’t you come over to my house? I can get you cleaned up. I assume you just moved into village?”
“Yes, that I did.”
“Then I can help you find your new house after!” Pierce says cheerfully. We both walk through the village at decent speed. We pass the yellow duck, who is just eyeing me and Pierce. I look at everything around me, while Pierce just looks at me smiling. I turn to him, and then he caws a little, just like he did when he laughed earlier. I laughed as well. He leads me to a decently sized wooden home. Opening the door, I nod and walk in.
“Why don’t you come over to my house? I can get you cleaned up. I assume you just moved into village?”
“Yes, that I did.”
“Then I can help you find your new house after!” Pierce says cheerfully. We both walk through the village at decent speed. We pass the yellow duck, who is just eyeing me and Pierce. I look at everything around me, while Pierce just looks at me smiling. I turn to him, and then he caws a little, just like he did when he laughed earlier. I laughed as well. He leads me to a decently sized wooden home. Opening the door, I nod and walk in.
“Sit down, sit down!” he says, as he points to a Regal Couch. I gladly sit down, rubbing my leg that was scraped pretty badly.
“You sure got banged up.” Pierce says, wetting a rag in a sink.
“Sure did!” I say cheerfully, looking at the dirt on myself. He then walks over, kneeling because of his height.
“This will hurt, but it will help.” He then looks at me, and puts the rag softly on my cheek. I cringe from the pain.
“Sure did!” I say cheerfully, looking at the dirt on myself. He then walks over, kneeling because of his height.
“This will hurt, but it will help.” He then looks at me, and puts the rag softly on my cheek. I cringe from the pain.
“It’s okay.” Pierce says pulling back. I smile, and tell him to continue. After a few minutes of warm water and a bit of pain, he gets up. Looking at a few spots of clearish blood, he goes to get some bandages.
“Luckily your leg isn’t as bad as we thought.” He says wrapping them around my leg.
“I know…”I say as Pierce gets up. I also get up.
“Let’s get going.” I say.
“Alright.” Pierce says, walking to me and then turning away.
“Uhh…”I utter.
“Get on my back!” he says. I shrug and jump on. Leaving the house, we look around.
“Can’t have you walking around on a hurt leg right now.” Pierce says supportively. Looking around, I see a girl running with a cat, chasing a butterfly with nets.
“What’re their names?” I say inquisitively.
“The cat’s name is Rosie, and the girl’s name is Serane.”
“Oh, alright. Who was that duck?”
“That was Joey. He can be a jerk sometimes…”Pierce says, sighing. He also points out another cat, named Punchy.
After awhile, we finally find my house. After jumping off Pierce’s back, I open the door, which creaks while I do so. Looking around, I see a Phonograph, a bed, and a table.
“Not much at all!” I say, looking at the wallpaper.
“"I know. But we can always go to the city and get new stuff.”
“But…” I mumble, “I have no money.”
“Oh, no problem. I have plenty.” He says cheerfully.
“I can’t let you do that!” I say shocked.
“I want to.” Pierce says blankly.
“Alright. Come here in an hour I guess?”
“Sure, Jared!” he says happily.
“See you then!” I say as Pierce runs out. Looking at my house, I feel a sense of happiness, as well as solitude.
“"I know. But we can always go to the city and get new stuff.”
“But…” I mumble, “I have no money.”
“Oh, no problem. I have plenty.” He says cheerfully.
“I can’t let you do that!” I say shocked.
“I want to.” Pierce says blankly.
“Alright. Come here in an hour I guess?”
“Sure, Jared!” he says happily.
“See you then!” I say as Pierce runs out. Looking at my house, I feel a sense of happiness, as well as solitude.
On a side note...I don't think I formatted it correctly...but either way, enjoy!
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