Aethersphere, a story I'll be updating on Wattpad

[Leo King]

Hey all! I've started to get into writing again, so I thought maybe I'd post chapter 1 of an ongoing story called Aethersphere. If you do read it, please give feedback! The story is here. Thank you!

 

[frogslime]

Ooh, I like it! Though, I recommend formatting dialogue like this:

I learned that from this Tumblr post, actually:

I forget to do these sometimes, but it's a good thing to do.
I hope this helps

 

[Leo King]

Ooh, I like it! Though, I recommend formatting dialogue like this:
View attachment 300436
I learned that from this Tumblr post, actually:
View attachment 300437
I forget to do these sometimes, but it's a good thing to do.
I hope this helps

Thank you for the feedback! Hopefully I remember to do that