Neat!! ^_^
Reading it now. It's funny how I can have my game theory in the back of my head while going through this. It's almost like validation. *LOL* So far, I'm enjoying it. It's difficult to write well in first person, but I'm getting some decent imagery from your fic. I'll leave a full review in a bit when I come back from running some errands.
While any story rating below M isn't exactly my cup of tea, it's pretty good.
I like it!
It's amazing!
(Also sorry we haven't talked in a while, I've been a bit busy, haven't had much time)