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Cabbage's Art! Please critique (Taking Requests)

;v; You are so good. I REALLY love your coloring and shading. It's spectacular!
just work on shapes, and your set.
Take a life drawing class? Practice is really the only thing that will improve your art lol. Me too.

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Work on nose though. Nostrils generally point up.
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;v; You are so good. I REALLY love your coloring and shading. It's spectacular!
just work on shapes, and your set.
Take a life drawing class? Practice is really the only thing that will improve your art lol. Me too.
I think you're an excellent artist as well! :) I'm curious what you mean by shapes considering there are so many, but nonetheless I'll keep practicing. I wish I had enough time to take an actual art class. My art class at school is more assignment oriented than actual teaching.

Oh and thanks for the tips! I've always had trouble with noses. XD
 
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teach me senpai
I suck at colorinngggg <//3
you're so amazing, I love your gallery
but yeah I don't really think I can say anything that can add up to what everyone else already pointed out
keep up the amazing work, and don't stop drawing
 
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teach me senpai
I suck at colorinngggg <//3
you're so amazing, I love your gallery
but yeah I don't really think I can say anything that can add up to what everyone else already pointed out
keep up the amazing work, and don't stop drawing
Thanks! He he I can't really teach you since I'm still learning a lot myself, but just keep practicing! I mostly got to where I am by experimenting, so that might help too. :)
 
Thanks! He he I can't really teach you since I'm still learning a lot myself, but just keep practicing! I mostly got to where I am by experimenting, so that might help too. :)

thanks! I wont be spamming this thread now but I'll be on the look out for more art
 
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I started on a raccoon. I'm still not sure what to do about the background.

Seems like a pretty straightforward piece :O I can visualize what you're going for. Maybe complete the tree trunk he's hiding in then add some forest floor details in front of him and maybe hints of trees behind? I'd recommend doing some quick doodles to get a sense of composition first. Maybe a couple quick color keys too. Always helps me nail a piece. Hope that helped! The raccoon itself looks good so far, maybe add some shadows?
 
Seems like a pretty straightforward piece :O I can visualize what you're going for. Maybe complete the tree trunk he's hiding in then add some forest floor details in front of him and maybe hints of trees behind? I'd recommend doing some quick doodles to get a sense of composition first. Maybe a couple quick color keys too. Always helps me nail a piece. Hope that helped! The raccoon itself looks good so far, maybe add some shadows?
I knew I was forgetting something! Thanks for reminding me about the shadows. I'll figure something out. :)
 
I'm working on something for a skateboard competition in art class. I find warrior otters riding flying dolphins a great representation of Virginia Beach.

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I don't have any criticism to give, but I do have a lot of praise I could give you in it's place ;)
 
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