TinyCentaur
Soft Centaur Woman
Im practicing my driving theory rn and I'm on my break so i drew this for someone
yo yo yo
your arts real refreshin', like a spring breeze !
'Cept (There's always a 'cept somewhere) I see hands ain't your strong suit. Quite perplexin', hands are. Their strange long digits are creepy and palms so uncomfortably large, so you try with decent palms but stubby fingers.
BUT NO WORRY! BILLY MAYS HERE WITH ANOTHER FANTASTIC PRODUCT.
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ABOVE YOU CAN SEE THE ACTION OF RED AND BLUE LINES, INTEGRAL TO THE CREATION OF EYE-BURNING SKY BLUE LINES.
IN THE TOP LEFT CORNER SHOWS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THE FINGERS ARE ALL THE SAME SIZE! CRAZY, HUH?
ok but seriously. This is what I do to create hands. Other than that I advise you to try drawing RL hands from RL pictures (keeping your hand in place is sorta hard :B)
And even more seriously, you have lots of potential. Would love to see you shine bright from the master's seat
Since you asked for critique, I'd like to go ahead and point some stuff out.
Pros:
On the good side, your art is definitely beginning to flourish. There's a style there that is so close to being visualized that it's almost palpable.
Personally I like the sketchy, flat shaded pieces. They show your workflow quite well.
The creative side of what you're drawing is right on point. It almost seems like you're holding yourself back from some interesting designs because you're not sure the ideas will work. Either way, the content is definitely fetching.
Cons:
Now when I say con, I don't mean bad. First things first, let's focus on your use of color. While your line work is strong in a conceptual way, I'd personally like to see something of a finished product with color making up your change of value instead of black pen. You have a talent here, and stretching out into that kind of change may be an extra oomph to your already beautiful pieces.
Your proportions are a bit off on some, but good in others. Studying pose and body language may greatly benefit your work.
Suggestions:
Take a little more time per piece. Even if it's a sketch, look at it and think about what colors you can add, or creative additions you can do to give it that pizzazz that screams "my style." Style is something difficult to get down, and if you keep cracking at it you'll reach something in no time.
Experiment with background and perspective. I'd like to see some finished pieces!
Other than that this is pretty solid. Good work.
Thank you so much! I found this to be super helpful. c: I'll totally try to draw a background scene some time soon, or maybe a full body piece as practice. Sometimes I use different coloured lines instead of black, but since you mention it i'll try to use non-black lines for my finished versions from now on I think.
I can't seem to have nice smooth shading for the life of me.
I am getting a little impatient and bored now so I'll guess I'll continue tomorrow, and hopefully make it have nicer shading.