[CHANGED EXAMPLE]Hows my art?

[Locket]

Spoiler: Here it is!

I KNOW:
-The eyes need improvment
-It needs to be colored
- The shoes

 

[riummi]

Spoiler: if you're asking for some critique? not trying to be mean or smt. lol

-Her right leg seems to be twisting inward .-.
-I think her hands are facing the wrong way > <
-The eyes are a bit too
-well, you already know about the lineart so...but i guess the hair is the worst part? (lines wise) They look pointy.

 

[Jacob]

I dont think its bad bc i know how hard digital art is

some advice:

~Try to make ur drawings wayyy bigger
~Make the head round, not pointy
~When doing strokes, try to make it one fast stroke, not a bunch of sketchy lines?
~Instead of using a black outline, use like a maroon...
~spread the eyes out a lil
~Hav some fun w the hair! go a little crazy w it sometimes
~Shading is a must
~again make it bigger so u can focus on detail
~PRACTICE PRACTICE PRACTICE

Good luck! I hope to see u very popular in the museum in a couple months

 

[Toot]

Well not every chibi needs a giant head. Not sure why everyone draws them that way...

Lol this could be better. I think you need a little more practice. You should practice with a bigger canvas and smoother strokes.

 

[Shirohibiki]

I dont think its bad bc i know how hard digital art is

some advice:

~Try to make ur drawings wayyy bigger
~Make the head round, not pointy
~When doing strokes, try to make it one fast stroke, not a bunch of sketchy lines?
~Instead of using a black outline, use like a maroon...
~spread the eyes out a lil
~Hav some fun w the hair! go a little crazy w it sometimes
~Shading is a must
~again make it bigger so u can focus on detail
~PRACTICE PRACTICE PRACTICE

Good luck! I hope to see u very popular in the museum in a couple months

black lines arent bad though. they just need to have proper weights.

pretty much what everyone else said otherwise

 

[tomothy]

adding to what everyone else said, the arms seem too long and should probably be shorter but that's p much everything i can see

 

[Albuns]

Well not every chibi needs a giant head. Not sure why everyone draws them that way...

Lol this could be better. I think you need a little more practice. You should practice with a bigger canvas and smoother strokes.

Bobbleheads look cute though~ :3

 

[Locket]

Thanks! I really liked drawing it. I got bored.

I was also using the sketchy pen in pixlr. It looked the best, but I'll see what I can do with the lines

The hair was a little rushed at the time, and I'll work on it! ( I had a headache and wanted to go home (was at a sleepover))

And the eyes were a little too close XD I realized that when drawing.

And I had an 800 x 800 pixel background, I don't know why I made it small.

I FORGOT TO SHADE SOME PARTS! I did some though.

 

[Locket]

Bump

 

[mayor-essy]

When I draw with pixlr using a mouse, I make the canvas huge (max).. then I zoom out so it fills the screen just a little and I start drawing lines with the sketchy pen full size, that way my lines turned out way smoother. Just resize it after so the picture isn't way too big. I do recommend downloading something like fire alpaca though.. since the lines turn out way less sketchy and pixelated. And I don't have to do the whole resizing stuff I just explained. My doodle stuff turned out way better since I used it.

 

[Locket]

Bump!

 

[riummi]

i cannot emphasize how much you need to practice more anatomy ;A; and after that, peace shall be restored

 

[oreo]

her body figure looks distorted (arms, legs, feet, posture)
the hair and bangs are very chunky

just work mainly on anatomy rn