Critique? Its hard to know when something is wrong

[FleuraBelle]

All in the title

Spoiler: critique these please!

character belongs to kianli

character belongs to Caddbberry

 

[namiieco]

Personally, I think the 2nd and last ones are the best. You could add more shading to the hair.
Overall I think that they are pretty good, though

 

[Milleram]

These are all really cute! I especially love the first one! The only thing I would suggest is, for the last one, I maybe would have moved her belt up a bit. The way it is now, it looks like she is missing a pelvis and that her legs are attached directly to her torso. Overall though, it's still a really cute picture. The pose is fun and the colours are nice. Keep up the good work!

 

[apharel]

Best advice is to spend more time on your art and it'll look better.

Taper the edges of your lines to make them look more smooth and less harsh. Tapering the edges of the highlights and shading will make things blend better and look more smooth. Overdoing it, however, will make things look less structured. Spend more time defining the shape of the highlight and shading unless they're intended to be a sketch wherein you're just planning colors.

It's all a stylistic choice though.

 

[FleuraBelle]

Aww thanks! These were all super helpful!
Shame I saw them just now. But thanks for the insight!

 

[FleuraBelle]

A major thing you guys told me to fix was to include more shading in the hair. I took some time to figure out how and I even attempted doing so. They're not so great but I wanna know what you guys think. I think including the shading would make my art look more balanced in terms of shading.

Spoiler: Big pictures

 

[Tensu]

A major thing you guys told me to fix was to include more shading in the hair. I took some time to figure out how and I even attempted doing so. They're not so great but I wanna know what you guys think. I think including the shading would make my art look more balanced in terms of shading.

Spoiler: Big pictures

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Dang! You're getting really good! Thanks for being such a great inspiration for me!!

 

[Paxx]

I just have to say that your art style is super cute omg! :'D

 

[FleuraBelle]

Dang! You're getting really good! Thanks for being such a great inspiration for me!!

Aww thank you so much for the kind words! They mean alot! ♡
I'm happy to be an inspiration, I hope I can continue to inspire you so we can both improve together! :3

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I just have to say that your art style is super cute omg! :'D

Thank you!
I really like your art too! Though animals are kind of on my weak side. ^^'