Critique my art! (UPDATED)

[okaimii]

As the title says.

Spoiler: Added more examples!

1. https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.ne...=06af8dc000e9d8d0c9672627b22019e6&oe=565B3674

2. https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.ne...=5f2eabff65dccd40acf00764eba4dfff&oe=5648CA39

3. https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.ne...=cf04bf4b90be17b3fb745d72f6c46cb1&oe=5642AD1D

4. https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.ne...=15518ef881bbb3b161bf1223c9954478&oe=56472D3B

5. https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.ne...=ac321ba9e5f92a4b3f53128e0f590719&oe=563A051C

6. https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.ne...258_839764359435186_2800314276185856304_o.jpg

7. https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.ne...=f811e906f3132c35d981184f533fd456&oe=56444577 *new*

Additional question: If I were to open an art shop, do you think my drawings would sell? (tbt currency)


Edit: Most people had said I need to work on making my drawings more finished looking (i.e add more details, backgrounds, etc) but I'm not quite sure how to go about that. If anyone can give advice/tips on how to do that specifically, I'd be grateful. Any other critique is much appreciate as well.

 

[himeki]

yes they would sell
10^100 TBT

 

[okaimii]

Bump

 

[Jas]

Yes! I especially like that first one! I'd say maybe up to 300 (I don't know! I'm not very good with prices haha) TBT?

 

[okaimii]

Yes! I especially like that first one! I'd say maybe up to 300 (I don't know! I'm not very good with prices haha) TBT?

Whoa, that's a lot! And thanks for your nice comment!

 

[Albuns]

Woah, how did you get the skin texture on the third picture to be that smooth? They all look great!

If you opened an art shop, your drawings would most likely sell more than mine. xD

 

[Money Hunter]

I would def buy!!! Probably 200 BTB for a headshot??

 

[okaimii]

Woah, how did you get the skin texture on the third picture to be that smooth? They all look great!

If you opened an art shop, your drawings would most likely sell more than mine. xD

I believe I used the blur tool a lot for that. And thanks! I don't know about all that though. I've seen your art and it's great!

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I would def buy!!! Probably 200 BTB for a headshot??

Really? Thank you! And that seems like a reasonable price for me.

 

[biibii]

i love i love!!
i would def buy for 100-600 tbt

 

[puppy]

i honestly think like 500tbt just for a headshot bc its really good???

 

[okaimii]

Bump

 

[Albuns]

I believe I used the blur tool a lot for that. And thanks! I don't know about all that though. I've seen your art and it's great!

Pfft, I still can't color to save my life nor do digital art like you can. But thankies for such kind words! ;w;

 

[riummi]

YASss i think they would be able to sell :') Perhaps around the range of 400-500 btb for the first one? Maybe more if you did some more shading c: People here love this style so im sure you'll get business! (aka. me)

 

[Forek]

Dude these are good! I'm sure people would pay lots. One thing i would do is use a tiny brush, and try to remove some of the lines. Like some of the excess that overlaps with something else. Mostly on the hair though. Other then that, looks great! Would give it a 8.

 

[okaimii]

Dude these are good! I'm sure people would pay lots. One thing i would do is use a tiny brush, and try to remove some of the lines. Like some of the excess that overlaps with something else. Mostly on the hair though. Other then that, looks great! Would give it a 8.

Can you explain further? I'm not quite sure what you mean.
Are you referring to the second drawing?

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Pfft, I still can't color to save my life nor do digital art like you can. But thankies for such kind words! ;w;

I have a difficult time coloring too. But no problem! Glad I could encourage your fantastic art skills.

 

[riummi]

Can you explain further? I'm not quite sure what you mean.
Are you referring to the second drawing?

i think they mean...

look at the second one~ its very sketchy and the lines for the hair kind of stick out. As in they arent very connected. (the tips of her hair has other lines sticking out)

back to me: lol i think thats meant to be sketchy????

 

[okaimii]

i think they mean...

look at the second one~ its very sketchy and the lines for the hair kind of stick out. As in they arent very connected. (the tips of her hair has other lines sticking out)

back to me: lol i think thats meant to be sketchy????

Yeah, it was meant to be sketchy. I have a few "styles" I like to work with and that's one of them. But I guess I should clean up my drawings more often.

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YASss i think they would be able to sell :') Perhaps around the range of 400-500 btb for the first one? Maybe more if you did some more shading c: People here love this style so im sure you'll get business! (aka. me)

damn that much hOly im flattered//
Thank you! That means a lot to hear from you. I admire your artistic ability. *v* And I actually did that one for free, along with the second one.

 

[riummi]

D'aw thank you ;v;
Hehe I'm a fan of sketchy styles too~ //mainly cuz I can't lineart OTL

 

[puppy]

would you be interested in trades tho

 

[okaimii]

would you be interested in trades tho

why tho