Critique my art! (UPDATED)

[puppy]

why tho

i wanted... to do an art trade w/ you lmao (':

 

[inkling]

Very good. Not sure why you're asking for critique? Like it's technically well done and its pretyy and attractive so not much to say. The outlines and colors are good. Maybe branch out. Like try to vary emotions and facial expressions. To receive helpful feedback you need to kinda explain where you wanna go or maybe your personal thoughts about your work.

In general I would say you need to think about what you wana create or represent. Like do you want to do character concepts , if so you need to practice full body characters with more detail. Maybe you want to just paint a picture though? If so, forget what I just said, instead you need to put your portraits in some type of complete environment ment. Like frame them and color in the bg, even if it's just abstract

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And yes your drawings would definitely sell

 

[Beige]

Spoiler: I try embarrassingly hard at giving critique im sorry

Looking good! I find that sketchy styles look a whole lot nicer (and more stylised/finished) with less smooth brushes, like if you use a less solid brush texture, or you could draw the lineart in a different colour to make it less harsh, like in the first pic.

also the second and third pictures look great but to really tie them up as more finished/professional looking pieces you could find a way to work them into the background more smoothly. in the first picture you did that great by having the main colour the same as the background, but you could also try out borders, objects, text, scrolls anything really... just something to make the drawings look more finished off because i found when drawing non-fullbody stuff it looks a lot nicer with a little background or something. does that make sense..? im not great at explaining stuff at all haha

anyway yes i think your stuff would definitely sell well!! and practise makes perfect so an art shop would give you lots of different stuff to draw which is fun and challenging and useful if you're looking to perfect your art

I hope none of this came across as harsh, i try my hardest to give thorough advice on what i personally find useful for drawing (so this is all just 100% my opinion and im not a great artist honestly), again i really like your style it's looking really lovely right now!

 

[okaimii]

i wanted... to do an art trade w/ you lmao (':

I was just kidding, hah. But it depends. I don't think I can do one anytime soon because I have a lot of drawing requests I have to do right now. But I may be able to in the future.

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Very good. Not sure why you're asking for critique? Like it's technically well done and its pretyy and attractive so not much to say. The outlines and colors are good. Maybe branch out. Like try to vary emotions and facial expressions. To receive helpful feedback you need to kinda explain where you wanna go or maybe your personal thoughts about your work.

In general I would say you need to think about what you wana create or represent. Like do you want to do character concepts , if so you need to practice full body characters with more detail. Maybe you want to just paint a picture though? If so, forget what I just said, instead you need to put your portraits in some type of complete environment ment. Like frame them and color in the bg, even if it's just abstract

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And yes your drawings would definitely sell

Spoiler: I try embarrassingly hard at giving critique im sorry

Looking good! I find that sketchy styles look a whole lot nicer (and more stylised/finished) with less smooth brushes, like if you use a less solid brush texture, or you could draw the lineart in a different colour to make it less harsh, like in the first pic.

also the second and third pictures look great but to really tie them up as more finished/professional looking pieces you could find a way to work them into the background more smoothly. in the first picture you did that great by having the main colour the same as the background, but you could also try out borders, objects, text, scrolls anything really... just something to make the drawings look more finished off because i found when drawing non-fullbody stuff it looks a lot nicer with a little background or something. does that make sense..? im not great at explaining stuff at all haha

anyway yes i think your stuff would definitely sell well!! and practise makes perfect so an art shop would give you lots of different stuff to draw which is fun and challenging and useful if you're looking to perfect your art

I hope none of this came across as harsh, i try my hardest to give thorough advice on what i personally find useful for drawing (so this is all just 100% my opinion and im not a great artist honestly), again i really like your style it's looking really lovely right now!

Thanks so much for your guys opinions! I'll definitely try more things out like backgrounds and such (although I'm not sure where to start exactly). I appreciate your words and will definitely take your guys advice.

 

[okaimii]

Bump!

 

[mayor-essy]

I would pay 300-600 tbt for the one like the first one.. It looks so good. ;~; I love the simplicity.

 

[okaimii]

I would pay 300-600 tbt for the one like the first one.. It looks so good. ;~; I love the simplicity.

Thanks. It feels good to hear people would consider buying my art. =u=

 

[Luxanna]

-Triggered, heavy breathing-the first drawing I would throw sparkles everywhere, with dots @w@, but thats just my coloring style xD
I really enjoy your lineart, I'm struggling to get better at it myself, so props to you!
I think you're doing great, I think this might be bias because I enjoy colors, but I feel your color/shade is a little plain. I think mostly because they have a light/white skin so it comes off as plain.
for background even something simple as outlined with a different color, putting some dots or even a giant circle on the background does wonders xD
Edit: This is something I personally would use, I dont know if you enjoy it, but its something >.<.

Spoiler: backgrounds

 

[okaimii]

-Triggered, heavy breathing-the first drawing I would throw sparkles everywhere, with dots @w@, but thats just my coloring style xD
I really enjoy your lineart, I'm struggling to get better at it myself, so props to you!
I think you're doing great, I think this might be bias because I enjoy colors, but I feel your color/shade is a little plain. I think mostly because they have a light/white skin so it comes off as plain.
for background even something simple as outlined with a different color, putting some dots or even a giant circle on the background does wonders xD

Thanks for the advice! I know I'm super bad with backgrounds and shading and I'm trying to work on it. tbh i'm kinda scared to experiment because i'm afraid i'll add too much shading //cries
I'll definitely try out what you suggested. I appreciate it!