kaitastrophe
Senior Member
Hello!
So I made a new oc, (just a rough draft!) and I want YOU guys to critique them!
I will update as I make new ocs!
Please dont be so harsh, as I am very sensitive!
But other than that, critique away, and feel free to leave suggestions!
Name: Francesca (FRAN-CHES-CA)
Often goes by: Frankie
Age: 15
Appearance: Thick, curly, bright red hair. (Think kind of 'Merida' style, only not THAT thick and curly.)
When she smiles, there is a space between her two front teeth, due to a bike accident, and the space cannot be filled because the tooth will not grow back.
She is average-height, and there's nothing very extravagant about her (other than her hair).
She has a small build, and has small breasts and a small backside.
Personality: Frankie is very enthusiastic, bubbly person, and when she starts talking, she often can't stop.
She is very witty and imaginative, and when she sets her mind to something, you can give up all hope of trying to change her mind.
Because of this, she is also very stubborn and self-indulgent.
She also has what some may call 'foot-in-mouth' syndrome, which is that you dont often think before you speak, which can make her seem rude and disrespectful, when (MOST) of the time she has the best intentions in mind. (Which many not always be the best!)
Frankie doesnt take time to analyse a situation, she usually just jumps in at the most unappropiate times, sometimes in the worst ways possible, causing her to get in a lot of trouble.
However, she is very passionate in whatever she does, and can be really devoted to anything she sets her mind to. She can also be reliable, although her ways of resolving problem arent always the safest. She can also be oversensitive at times, causing her to break down in tears when something she was very devoted to doesnt go out the way she hoped it will.
Likes/Dislikes:
Despite her personality, Frankie dislikes sweets, although she can be found with a lollipop or a small candy in her mouth sometimes.
She prefers junk foods such as pizza, chinese food, pasta, and the likes.
She likes animals and children, although she often doesnt have the patience to deal with crying, screaming babies.
So I made a new oc, (just a rough draft!) and I want YOU guys to critique them!
I will update as I make new ocs!
Please dont be so harsh, as I am very sensitive!
But other than that, critique away, and feel free to leave suggestions!
Name: Francesca (FRAN-CHES-CA)
Often goes by: Frankie
Age: 15
Appearance: Thick, curly, bright red hair. (Think kind of 'Merida' style, only not THAT thick and curly.)
When she smiles, there is a space between her two front teeth, due to a bike accident, and the space cannot be filled because the tooth will not grow back.
She is average-height, and there's nothing very extravagant about her (other than her hair).
She has a small build, and has small breasts and a small backside.
Personality: Frankie is very enthusiastic, bubbly person, and when she starts talking, she often can't stop.
She is very witty and imaginative, and when she sets her mind to something, you can give up all hope of trying to change her mind.
Because of this, she is also very stubborn and self-indulgent.
She also has what some may call 'foot-in-mouth' syndrome, which is that you dont often think before you speak, which can make her seem rude and disrespectful, when (MOST) of the time she has the best intentions in mind. (Which many not always be the best!)
Frankie doesnt take time to analyse a situation, she usually just jumps in at the most unappropiate times, sometimes in the worst ways possible, causing her to get in a lot of trouble.
However, she is very passionate in whatever she does, and can be really devoted to anything she sets her mind to. She can also be reliable, although her ways of resolving problem arent always the safest. She can also be oversensitive at times, causing her to break down in tears when something she was very devoted to doesnt go out the way she hoped it will.
Likes/Dislikes:
Despite her personality, Frankie dislikes sweets, although she can be found with a lollipop or a small candy in her mouth sometimes.
She prefers junk foods such as pizza, chinese food, pasta, and the likes.
She likes animals and children, although she often doesnt have the patience to deal with crying, screaming babies.
