critique my trash

[EtchaSketch]

I'm getting so sick of not being able to sell art and raise money for my website

So i need help on improving so that I CAN actually do something for once in my life...


These:
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[tybalt_cake]

idiot:uhuhhu,its **** i can draw better look:


LolxD,jk
I Fell in love with ur art,really
Even in isnt a Pro critique,i hope you keep the good art!

 

[axo]

Jetix, your art is too pro for me. How do you even draw like that...?

 

[EtchaSketch]

Thank you, Jetix, that's real sweet


And nice art xD

 

[tybalt_cake]

Thank you, Jetix, that's real sweet


And nice art xD

Welcome!
(Plz,i beg to you to change that title,all the art is made with love,thnx!)

Jetix, your art is too pro for me. How do you even draw like that...?

Bruh,i am the MLG at drawing I suck ;___;

 

[Beige]

Spoiler: beep beep

Hey, imo you really excel at drawing animals and i have no critique for how you draw them at all really, but i do think you don't draw human anatomy as well (like with poses). For example, in the first picture her legs are too low down to match the angle they're bent at, here's a random picture i found on google of someone in a similar position that could help with the posing :
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In the first one the perspective also seems to be a bit off too, with the buildings being too close to the characters and too big. I don't really have any tips on improving that because honestly I can't do perspective at all myself... im afraid you're gunna' have to find a tutorial or something online, or maybe you could go outside and take your own photo of the pavement and buildings as a reference picture to compare it to your drawing

 

[Jacob]

omg ur art is freaking 20000x better than me TT.TT

i love the colors u use, it seems u have a natural talent in lines and colors
keep up the good work we all love it!!

 

[Albuns]

"One man's trash is another man's treasure."

What you call trash, I call amazing. I love how you did the eyes and just how they have that little reflective light in them~ the coloring is done pretty nicely as well! Another thing that caught my eye was how shiny the green leafy dog thing was, such sheen~ *u*

 

[Money Hunter]

time for critique!!

First picture: The legs of the girl need to be higher up (does that make sense) basically according to what you have drawn the legs are really small and the torso way bigger than it needs to be. Also the background and the way she's sitting are at different angles.

Other than that it looks awesome, your animal anatomy especially is perfect <3

 

[EtchaSketch]

Okay, so in the first picture, the characters are too big in comparison to the buildings and her torso needs to be smaller and her legs higher up. Got it.


And thank you guys... C"x>

 

[mayor-essy]

Your art is so colorful. I think it's adorable and very pretty.