Critique of art?

[Leil]

Hello! Well, I tried my best at digital art and would love any pointers and tips you may have. :3

(It's big. ._.)

Spoiler

Melba the normal koala.

I'm sure the shading is off, I'm dreadful at perspectives. Dx
This took two days on and off, I'm thinking of doing Walt next, then perhaps try a mayor.

 

[Locket]

You tried? That's way too amazing to have THAT good.

I have nothing to say! It's amazing!

 

[Leil]

You tried? That's way too amazing to have THAT good.

I have nothing to say! It's amazing!

Aw, you really think so? Thank you so much. :'D

 

[Locket]

Aw, you really think so? Thank you so much. :'D

But you tried? It's a masterpiece! Also your welcome.

(I'm gonna sit and browse TBT while pondering on how you tried and made it amazing)

 

[Shirohibiki]

i think its adorable! from what i can see i believe the left eye is too far from the right one? i think. as for your lines, try using different weights so it flows better the stagnant weight CAN be made to look good, and does with a chibi like that, but varying line weights will be good in the longrun.

i dont color so i cant comment on coloring but i tihnk it looks good! also it seems like things are a liiiittle bit slanted to the left, not sure if that was intended or not

 

[Leil]

i think its adorable! from what i can see i believe the left eye is too far from the right one? i think. as for your lines, try using different weights so it flows better the stagnant weight CAN be made to look good, and does with a chibi like that, but varying line weights will be good in the longrun.

i dont color so i cant comment on coloring but i tihnk it looks good! also it seems like things are a liiiittle bit slanted to the left, not sure if that was intended or not

Her eye is a bit wonky, didn't even notice. xD
I do agree with the line weight, and I'll probably try a a non black color next time too.
Yes indeed..everything does feel slanted..that was not intentional. xD

 

[Leil]

Blah, double post. xD

 

[MyLifeIsCake]

Cute~ I really like the shading and blending of colors together, it makes for a very natural look ^-^ The only thing for me is, (and this is just a preference of mine) the lines are a bit too straight and clean for my taste, but still, great work!

 

[Leil]

Cute~ I really like the shading and blending of colors together, it makes for a very natural look ^-^ The only thing for me is, (and this is just a preference of mine) the lines are a bit too straight and clean for my taste, but still, great work!

Thank you! I guess the shading isn't as bad as I thought. xD
Yeah, I really wish I had a tablet or something to sketch digitally, but since I don't I have to use a line tool, which is why the lines are so perfect. :/

 

[mayor-essy]

I think it looks absolutely adorable. I really love how you colored it. Though the lines look a little stiff. I myself really suck at lining so I think you did a fantastic job nonetheless. It's cute. Keep up the good work.

 

[Leil]

I think it looks absolutely adorable. I really love how you colored it. Though the lines look a little stiff. I myself really suck at lining so I think you did a fantastic job nonetheless. It's cute. Keep up the good work.

Thank you!~
Hah, I believe the lesson of this thread is to fix those darn lines. xD

 

[Leil]

Wow, another lag post. x_x