critique please - newbie artist xD

[LeilaChan]

I drew my mayor in a chibi style please comment opinions and critique!
I'm not an experienced artist so any tips or pointers really help out!



I may be doing some freebies for practise but Idk yet

Nearly forgot the image aha

 

[LeilaChan]

I used a different sized brush and its better please comment on this new one above ^^

 

[UtopiaJ]

Looking pretty cute. My biggest critique here is that the shoulders look really manly. instead of having her arms straight down. Have them more delicately curve away from the body. If you want I can make a red-line example to show you. I think that would help make your chibi cuter!

 

[LeilaChan]

Looking pretty cute. My biggest critique here is that the shoulders look really manly. instead of having her arms straight down. Have them more delicately curve away from the body. If you want I can make a red-line example to show you. I think that would help make your chibi cuter!

Thank you! Yes please that red line would help out, thanks!

 

[UtopiaJ]

Thank you! Yes please that red line would help out, thanks!

Its pretty simple but I hope you get what I mean. I also thinned out the neck and eyebrows to look more feminine. The blush is optional ^^;. I just added it for fun. So now you can make a cute chibi body base. Does this make sense?

 

[LeilaChan]

Yes thank you very much