Critiques, por favor?

[Buggy]

I think my art's pretty good, but I just wanted to see what others think and such as well as recommended pricing options. I'm thinking maybe 10-60 TBT right now.

Spoiler: le arts

I'm generally going for a traditional and relaxing feel, so if you have any tips on that feel free to bring them out. Just try not to make me sad if you are to give constructive critisism, lel.

 

[milkyi]

Your art is really cute!

 

[Money Hunter]

Spoiler: WARNING: SUPER BRUTAL

1. you need to have a proper lineart, it looks like a kid scribbled with a crayon right now.
2. the coloring looks like a child who cant color inside the lines.
3. the anatomy is pretty wonky, although the first one has pretty good anatomy.

I'd suggest first doing traditional art and then attempting digital art since anatomy and stuff needs to be nailed down before you go for other stuff.

If you want contstructive redlined criticism, state the programs you use and a run down of your methods.

 

[Buggy]

Hehe, I use some free art app. I kinda wanted to make it look like a sketchy sort of thing, so yeah. I guess I try to color a little outside the lines for a unique look of some sort.

 

[FruitsChinpoG]

Hehe, I use some free art app. I kinda wanted to make it look like a sketchy sort of thing, so yeah. I guess I try to color a little outside the lines for a unique look of some sort.

Actually I really quite like the sketchiness and coloring outside gives it a nice soothing glow/aura. Everything is very soft and it's very charming, and it feels like a children's book. Also, I like the first and last drawings the most

 

[crystalmilktea]

I get what you're going for with the colouring/line style Looks kind of like a watercolour effect!

 

[PeeBraiin]

I LOVE this!
Although the limes are scribbly and the colors are out of the lines I feel like it gives it a really cute aura!
I would buy one of these for like 50tbt~
Please tell me when you open up a shop! Ill definitely check it out~

 

[Money Hunter]

Do you use a mouse or a tablet?
Also I redlined a bunch of stuff for you

I have a tonne of stuff to help you out, I'll post it in a sec since it'll take a while

 

[biibii]

maybe try this App called ibispaint x?
its free and i started there ahah

 

[Buggy]

Ah yes, thank you for the advice <3
I'll definitely try this in the future. And I draw this on my iPod touch with my fingers. ;-; I really need a tablet.

 

[mayor-essy]

I like the colors and the lightness of your drawings.. they're so cute.
They look really soft.

 

[Hatori]

I don't know, I really like the cute crayon/pastel-ness of your artwork! I personally think it's adorable. :]

 

[himeki]

They're ok, but you have a long way to go before they are sale quality. The anatomy is pretty bad, and there isn't much detail. There is no unity in the style, and it looks weird to be honest. It unfortunately does look like a child's scribble who couldn't draw in the lines, so I recommend you don't do that, or make it neater. And for the line art, its very rough and the crayon tool probably isn't the best bet.
Sorry to be harsh, good luck with your drawing!

 

[mintellect]

Hehe, I use some free art app. I kinda wanted to make it look like a sketchy sort of thing, so yeah. I guess I try to color a little outside the lines for a unique look of some sort.

I think I use the same art app as you, I recognize the brush styles!
I think the scribble style is cute tbh, but personally I like to keep my drawings neat