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With the image I chose, it's kind of hard to get good looking text.

Yup, that world is pretty messed up. I wonder why the clones are made in the first place.
Well, she will be remembered by me. For a while.

And it's literally about a perilous peak. That's why I'm considering changing the title; I don't want it to be too blunt.

- - - Post Merge - - -

Oh, and if you couldn't tell from the title "Out of Time" and me specifying the time at the beginning of the chapters, time is one of the main themes in the story. That hasn't been explored much yet, though.

It looks cool! Btw, Wattpad has their own cover designing app. I use that to make my covers. It's neat. ^-^

I'll explain that later. I promise. ;)
Oh? Hm... maybe I'll give her some screen time through a flashback...

It's good to be blunt sometimes.

Oooh, time is a cool concept to explore!
 
Thanks! I always put really subtle 'deep' things in my covers (mostly for school projects tbh) that no one seems to notice. The clock on the cover is slightly off-centre which shows that something is not quite right in the mansion. And I'll have a look at the Wattpad cover designer. I've published the first two chapters now, which is everything so far (I split them up slightly differently).

Good :)
That would be good if the flashback were to reveal something important... otherwise it might just look a bit random XD

True.

It is one of my favourite concepts :) I also like to use foreshadowing in my stories...
 
Thanks! I always put really subtle 'deep' things in my covers (mostly for school projects tbh) that no one seems to notice. The clock on the cover is slightly off-centre which shows that something is not quite right in the mansion. And I'll have a look at the Wattpad cover designer. I've published the first two chapters now, which is everything so far (I split them up slightly differently).

Good :)
That would be good if the flashback were to reveal something important... otherwise it might just look a bit random XD

True.

It is one of my favourite concepts :) I also like to use foreshadowing in my stories...

Woah, that's a good skill to have!

Of course, the flashback won't be just random.

And yay! I need to work on my foreshadowing skills a bit... >.<
 
It's because I like to be deep about those things :)

I need to work on my foreshadowing too. I use it a lot, but I'm still getting the hang of it. I've already used a little bit in Out of Time, but it might be hard to spot.

Goodnight! And I'll really leave this time lol
 
It's because I like to be deep about those things :)

I need to work on my foreshadowing too. I use it a lot, but I'm still getting the hang of it. I've already used a little bit in Out of Time, but it might be hard to spot.

Goodnight! And I'll really leave this time lol

That's good. :)

Oh, really?

Night!
 
Yes, I used a little bit. It will hopefully become clearer where it is when the story develops more.

*swoops into the dark of the night*
 
Now I'll have to try and end the sections on Wishy Star Co in good places so they'll make sense as chapters on Wattpad.

What is your third favourite colour?
Do you like massage chairs?
Do you like fuzzy bugs?
 
Now I'll have to try and end the sections on Wishy Star Co in good places so they'll make sense as chapters on Wattpad.

What is your third favourite colour?
Do you like massage chairs?
Do you like fuzzy bugs?

You can also do minor editing if needed.

Green.
No.
Not really.
 
I'll probably revise the first chapters later today. I might eventually split the two off into different storylines, since I have an idea for how I want it to go, but with a CYOA it's up to the readers what happens. So, the CYOA on Wishy Star Co would be what you and the other members decide, and on Wattpad I'd write about the ideas I like the most. I'd just have to make sure I didn't get confused between them, as I can see that easily happening. We shall see.

Green is my third favourite too. First is blue and second is purple.
Me neither.
I don't like many bugs, really. I don't mind butterflies or moths.

Would you rather travel by boat, train or aeroplane? Which of those options is the worst?
 
I'll probably revise the first chapters later today. I might eventually split the two off into different storylines, since I have an idea for how I want it to go, but with a CYOA it's up to the readers what happens. So, the CYOA on Wishy Star Co would be what you and the other members decide, and on Wattpad I'd write about the ideas I like the most. I'd just have to make sure I didn't get confused between them, as I can see that easily happening. We shall see.

Green is my third favourite too. First is blue and second is purple.
Me neither.
I don't like many bugs, really. I don't mind butterflies or moths.

Would you rather travel by boat, train or aeroplane? Which of those options is the worst?

Are you sure? That seems like a lot of extra work. You could also get very confused between the two as they are really similar.

:eek: Are you my twin?!
Same.
Same, except I don't like moths.
 
It's just a possibility. Not a very practical one, I admit. It's probably be easier to not do that.

Yes. Surprise.
I don't mind the moths that are only a few millimetres long, but those are the only ones I see. I've never seen those giant furry moths in real life, thankfully.
 
It's just a possibility. Not a very practical one, I admit. It's probably be easier to not do that.

Yes. Surprise.
I don't mind the moths that are only a few millimetres long, but those are the only ones I see. I've never seen those giant furry moths in real life, thankfully.

Yeah... not practical but still an option.

*le gasp*
Oh, that makes sense.

Btw, the second line of your signature isn't centered. You better fix that. ;)
 
I can't imagine I'll end up disliking Out of Time anyway, to be honest. People may vote for the pathways, but I'm the one that creates those possible pathways in the first place.

*looks at camera in shock*

I'll go and fix that now. I'll be getting rid of that line as soon as I've got another dreamy moved in. I haven't had any new villagers in a while, and I'd like to tick another dreamy off the list.
 
I can't imagine I'll end up disliking Out of Time anyway, to be honest. People may vote for the pathways, but I'm the one that creates those possible pathways in the first place.

*looks at camera in shock*

I'll go and fix that now. I'll be getting rid of that line as soon as I've got another dreamy moved in. I haven't had any new villagers in a while, and I'd like to tick another dreamy off the list.

Very true!

By the way, want to see a post from the RP I'm currently in? My character killed someone and I'm proud of how gory the post was. ^w^
 
Sure. Is there anything I need to know about these characters, or should I just read whatever you give me?

Do you want to hear a secret?
 
Sure. Is there anything I need to know about these characters, or should I just read whatever you give me?

Do you want to hear a secret?

No background info, needed, really.

Jasper walked inside the music room and looked around the dingy room. The wallpaper was peeling and the whole aura in the room wasn't quite right. There was something wrong going on here. It was probably due to the fact that this home was owned by a pair of psychopaths. Jasper smirked. That was probably why. He found Monica resting on the piano, sitting on the stool while her head peacefully lay on the keys. Besides the piano, there were a few stands set up with lyrics in their slots while other instruments lay around. One, in particular, caught his eye. It was a harp.

Jasper went over to Monica's side and whispered in her ear. She started to move and Jasper picked up his axe. He performed a clean cut to her neck, killing her instantaneously, but that wasn't what he wanted to do. He wanted to leave a message for the other players in this little game. He picked up her body and lay it on the ground. The harp wasn't too heavy. In fact, Jasper could carry it quite comfortably. Taking his time, he used the delicate strings of the heart to cut Monica's frail, dead body into thin slices. Each slice couldn't have been more than a few inches wide. When he was done, there were hundreds of slices lying on the ground with a huge pool of blood already formed underneath.

Jasper walked over to the switches by the wall and turned on the fan. Almost as if by magic, Jasper watched in delight as the thin slices of Monica flew around the room, landing all willy-nilly, and spreading the delicious crimson blood everywhere. When the room was decorated enough, Jasper grabbed his axe and snuck away into the night, making sure to leave all the doors wide open for any visitors to find his creative work right away. Jasper grinned. He couldn't wait to see how they would react.

In fact, he would go to the security room right now. He scurried off up there and sat down in a chair, watching the monitor, and waiting. From now on, the game was going to be interesting. Jasper would make sure of it.

Sure. What kind of secret?
 
THE HARP

THE HARP

THE HARP

That's a lovely image. "The thin slices of Monica flew around the room" was a nice touch XD

I once wrote a short story about a night class music teacher who killed his students in instrument-related ways. That's why I once asked you about the harp-slicing lol. It was on a memory stick which was unfortunately stolen. I hope whoever stole it became mentally disturbed by that story :mad:. I'm really tempted to rewrite it, actually.

Any kind of secret you want.
 
THE HARP

THE HARP

THE HARP

That's a lovely image. "The thin slices of Monica flew around the room" was a nice touch XD

I once wrote a short story about a night class music teacher who killed his students in instrument-related ways. That's why I once asked you about the harp-slicing lol. It was on a memory stick which was unfortunately stolen. I hope whoever stole it became mentally disturbed by that story :mad:. I'm really tempted to rewrite it, actually.

Any kind of secret you want.

Yeah, I realized that the murder would take place in the music room and I remembered the harp. Then I thought, "Why not take it a few steps further?"

Thanks! I love it too! ^w^

Ooooh, that sounds epic. I feel like if you rewrote it now, it would be at least 100x better!

The secret to the universe? ;)
 
One should always 'take it a few steps further' in these situations.

I'm going to rewrite it tonight, I think. I wish I'd had that idea earlier; I've been stuck at home bored all day. I don't remember all of the deaths, but someone was crushed under a piano lid. I wish I could remember them, but at least now I might have some better ideas for deaths. I took the memory stick to school because it contained information for a presentation for my music class. I didn't want anyone clicking on the story as it was labelled "Music Story" and people might have thought it was my presentation. I decided to label my story something boring like "Physics Statistics" so no one would look. I hope whoever took it had a nasty shock.

The secret to the universe is 176.4.
 
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