(ΦωΦ) pixel critique please~

[Lord Citron]

bump ^.^

 

[staticistic1114]

I cannot see anything D:

 

[Lord Citron]

http://i.imgur.com/pxFYSla.png

here is a direct link ^.^

 

[piichinu]

Try not to shade white w grey ; v ;
Also try a diff shading color for the skin

 

[extreme-fuzzy-socks]

That's super cute, I'd love to commission you

 

[Lord Citron]

Try not to shade white w grey ; v ;
Also try a diff shading color for the skin

what would you suggest instead of grey? light blue maybe?

 

[Lord Citron]

bump (〜￣▽￣)〜

 

[Hirosuka]

Try making the pixels closer together so it flows more smoothly. Also, try making everything symmetrical and aligned. It's really good, but work a little more on shading ♥