GIVEAWAY (FINALLY) ENDED!!!

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Yep. The only condition is that can you tell me how you think of this next part?

"Honestly, it was pretty tame. I dozed off into the sunset as the train kept a slow but steady pace. Some people I've noticed were a bit worried about getting on this ride. Dawnpiplup stepped out to claim that we would be stopping at Bell City as a contest. I quickly got up! I needed it."

Sounds good! :) Love the writing, keep up the awesome work! :D
 
"We had some civil discussions as the bartender came over to give some cream. I didn't really need it so I politely denied.

"Oh, alright." the bartended said, "Hey, actually...want to know something?"

I answered yes nervously.

"So, to get the best chance of a prize, restart and type what you're going to say already in the ctrl c + ctrl v" she exclaimed.

I thanked her though I didn't understand at that time. Bell Town was quickly rolling up the hill, I sprang up from my seat to see what carts were in this train. I found about 10 carts when I walked in."


I personally think the last part kinda doesn't make sense.
 
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