Have I improved?

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Mar 15ish:

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Help me by answering these questions:

1. Have I improved?

2. If I have, by what margin?

3. How can I work on it?

4. Do you think I'm improving at a slow/average/fast pace? (Choose one and explain.)

I know this sounds like some weird quiz but please I really want to know if I'm doing well or if there are certain things I need to work on that are preventing me from getting better ;-;
 
i will try to asnwer these to the best of my ability for you, but keep in mind i am not a good art critic

1. Have I improved? yes

2. If I have, by what margin? a bit of a small margin; however, there is DEFINITE progress

3. How can I work on it? this is where im not so good -- the critique part lol. anatomy absolutely, expressions (eye shapes), basically everything needs work -- however! youre doing a good job with starting to pose! i applaud you for branching out and trying a new pose instead of continuing to use something static :) try to make the pose more fluid, to work with the body more. look up anatomy tutorials, try going off of reference photos. tracing stock photos is fine! get a feel for it! feel how the body works. (just dont claim it as your own/give credit haha) there are TONS of free stock photos/pose references to use. ive used them myself. it does help. so keep trying! i cannot comment on the coloring/shading as i do not do that, but my advice would be to find a solid light source and follow that.

4. Do you think I'm improving at a slow/average/fast pace? (Choose one and explain.) i cannot answer this. everyone's pacing is different, and what might be fast to me might be slow to someone else. so i really dont know.

good luck!! i hope my advice wasnt **** lmao
 
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i will try to asnwer these to the best of my ability for you, but keep in mind i am not a good art critic

1. Have I improved? yes

2. If I have, by what margin? a bit of a small margin; however, there is DEFINITE progress

3. How can I work on it? this is where im not so good -- the critique part lol. anatomy absolutely, expressions (eye shapes), basically everything needs work -- however! youre doing a good job with starting to pose! i applaud you for branching out and trying a new pose instead of continuing to use something static :) try to make the pose more fluid, to work with the body more. look up anatomy tutorials, try going off of reference photos. tracing stock photos is fine! get a feel for it! feel how the body works. (just dont claim it as your own/give credit haha) there are TONS of free stock photos/pose references to use. ive used them myself. it does help. so keep trying! i cannot comment on the coloring/shading as i do not do that, but my advice would be to find a solid light source and follow that.

4. Do you think I'm improving at a slow/average/fast pace? (Choose one and explain.) i cannot answer this. everyone's pacing is different, and what might be fast to me might be slow to someone else. so i really dont know.

good luck!! i hope my advice wasnt **** lmao

thank you so much!! :D
 
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