Aria Nook Violet
Senior Member
So I have a big original story that's on the works. It's going to take years to get done so if I came to all of you now for help 
by then you all will forget we even talked about this. Yeah that's how long is gonna take. Maybe some of you have a real good memory and won't forget. We will see.
My character that needs some opinions is the main villain of the story that's very hidden until the end and it's depression. Yup the story surprises you with it's theme. You when you actually read it the first time you think it's about the good old story about chosen teenagers when it turns out it isn't lol XD and is darker than it seems.
So depression has to be the scariest thing my story has to offer, the most powerful foe the heroines need to beat in order to put everything to its place and finally end the story forever. Yeah this is kind of a spoiler of my story but I am not telling you everything so don't worry there's alot of my story to learn when I finish it.
So depression first of all needs a scary name that's not depression lol
If you have any suggestions leave it in this thread. I will add the ones I like and think fits to the first thread.
Depression can assume different forms
WARNING! This has some graphic images so be careful! If you don't like to see graphic images don't click on the spoiler.
1st form - He's the main character and goddess shadow all along and spies on them on this mode. He's always there.
2nd form - The more depressed the character is the bigger he gets. This is his warning. He's coming to get you!
3rd form - He doesn't need a body anymore and has control over the host. He forms weird shapes
4th form - His able to separate his body parts, finally gets an eye and a mouth. His hands can get big to grab his victims.
5th form - Back to the humanoid form. He represent the tragedy and the despair of the depressed. He torments them like this.
6th form - More tormenting the goddess and the main character when they are on their lowest.
7th form - This form is for tormenting too lol all he does is be mean and torment lol
8th form - a big hand with an eye on it. The hands have cuts on it and are bloody. This is a form he uses for battle if previous forms weren't successful
Final form - this has a lot of symbolism. First the hands are bloody with cuts. On the hand to the left we can read death cut on the skin. The left hand is also holding a dying head on a rope. The right hand has an bloody on it and a word hurt written on the skin. In the center we see a hourglass but of hearts. The sands falls symbolizing the time that the heroines have to beat him before they die. This final form is only present on the final battle against the goddess.
If you have any more ideas for forms that depression can take let me know. They have to be scary though and relate to the disease. If you have any more ideas for this character development let me know.
by then you all will forget we even talked about this. Yeah that's how long is gonna take. Maybe some of you have a real good memory and won't forget. We will see.My character that needs some opinions is the main villain of the story that's very hidden until the end and it's depression. Yup the story surprises you with it's theme. You when you actually read it the first time you think it's about the good old story about chosen teenagers when it turns out it isn't lol XD and is darker than it seems.
So depression has to be the scariest thing my story has to offer, the most powerful foe the heroines need to beat in order to put everything to its place and finally end the story forever. Yeah this is kind of a spoiler of my story but I am not telling you everything so don't worry there's alot of my story to learn when I finish it.
So depression first of all needs a scary name that's not depression lol
If you have any suggestions leave it in this thread. I will add the ones I like and think fits to the first thread.
Depression can assume different forms
WARNING! This has some graphic images so be careful! If you don't like to see graphic images don't click on the spoiler.
1st form - He's the main character and goddess shadow all along and spies on them on this mode. He's always there.
2nd form - The more depressed the character is the bigger he gets. This is his warning. He's coming to get you!
3rd form - He doesn't need a body anymore and has control over the host. He forms weird shapes
4th form - His able to separate his body parts, finally gets an eye and a mouth. His hands can get big to grab his victims.
5th form - Back to the humanoid form. He represent the tragedy and the despair of the depressed. He torments them like this.
6th form - More tormenting the goddess and the main character when they are on their lowest.
7th form - This form is for tormenting too lol all he does is be mean and torment lol
8th form - a big hand with an eye on it. The hands have cuts on it and are bloody. This is a form he uses for battle if previous forms weren't successful
Final form - this has a lot of symbolism. First the hands are bloody with cuts. On the hand to the left we can read death cut on the skin. The left hand is also holding a dying head on a rope. The right hand has an bloody on it and a word hurt written on the skin. In the center we see a hourglass but of hearts. The sands falls symbolizing the time that the heroines have to beat him before they die. This final form is only present on the final battle against the goddess.
If you have any more ideas for forms that depression can take let me know. They have to be scary though and relate to the disease. If you have any more ideas for this character development let me know.
