How does my art look, and what would be an appropriate price?
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Not trying to be mean by this!
The lineart is quite sketchy, and you can still see the pencil underneath. You should remove it before colouring using pencils.The shading is good, but the colours run out of the lines. Lastly, the head is a bit...squishes, they eyes are close together and uneven. Good luck!
The lineart is quite sketchy, and you can still see the pencil underneath. You should remove it before colouring using pencils.The shading is good, but the colours run out of the lines. Lastly, the head is a bit...squishes, they eyes are close together and uneven. Good luck!
cherriielle
//finger guns//
Would you mind if a red-lined it?
It's easier to draw then to say xD
It's easier to draw then to say xD
Keitara
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quick crappy outline for you
keep it balanced. my tip is: always start with the upper body first so that you can adjust the head & leg size to it. (like I did with the outline!) your head was quite deformed, make sure you have enough place for the eyes, and keep them a bit smaller. look carefully at the anatomy for example on yourself and use stock images on the Internet to learn poses and anatomy! don't draw the hair so far away from the head,, it's actually really near to the skin! also add more dynamism into it! don't make it stiff.
sorry I'm rushing a bit atm, if you have further questions, you can always vm me!
I'll do what I can to help you!
keep it balanced. my tip is: always start with the upper body first so that you can adjust the head & leg size to it. (like I did with the outline!) your head was quite deformed, make sure you have enough place for the eyes, and keep them a bit smaller. look carefully at the anatomy for example on yourself and use stock images on the Internet to learn poses and anatomy! don't draw the hair so far away from the head,, it's actually really near to the skin! also add more dynamism into it! don't make it stiff.
sorry I'm rushing a bit atm, if you have further questions, you can always vm me!
I'll do what I can to help you!
cherriielle
//finger guns//
All right, I'm done
I tried to do it in a similar style, I don't know how well I did though xD
So, a few things to point out!
-Keep working on your anatomy! As others have said, use stock pictures, but also try to get a good enough understanding to work from memory. (This takes LOTS of time, but just keep working at it!)
-Your lineart is quite sloppy. I'm not sure what pen you're using, but when I'm doing my lineart I tend to do short-ish strokes, but making sure to continue the line exactly (or close to) where I left off. This takes some practice, but you get smoother and less messy lineart.
-Make it flow! Your clothing and hair is quite stiff (I admit my hair is stiff, but Keitara's is great, so just look at hers)
-Eyes. Not much to say that hasn't been said, but just keep working on them.
Keep up the good work!
So, a few things to point out!
-Keep working on your anatomy! As others have said, use stock pictures, but also try to get a good enough understanding to work from memory. (This takes LOTS of time, but just keep working at it!)
-Your lineart is quite sloppy. I'm not sure what pen you're using, but when I'm doing my lineart I tend to do short-ish strokes, but making sure to continue the line exactly (or close to) where I left off. This takes some practice, but you get smoother and less messy lineart.
-Make it flow! Your clothing and hair is quite stiff (I admit my hair is stiff, but Keitara's is great, so just look at hers)
-Eyes. Not much to say that hasn't been said, but just keep working on them.
Keep up the good work!
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