I need help lol. Critiques please????

[Finnian]

I wanna actually make some good art once in awhile and I know this is crap. Please tel me what's wrong with it please??

;A;
yes i know her hair is missing.

 

[Jarrad]

It's good

I'd redefine the lips a bit more

her breasts look a bit strange, though. and also her right shoulder needs to be a bit bigger. ik youve tried to make it seem as though it's angled but its just a bit too small

perhaps try to replicate her right arm similar to her left, so it gives off the indication that she has her arms wrapped around her body (which would also be useful as a natural border for her chest)

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but ye other than those things it's actually really good! I like your style

 

[Finnian]

It's good

I'd redefine the lips a bit more

her breasts look a bit strange, though. and also her right shoulder needs to be a bit bigger. ik youve tried to make it seem as though it's angled but its just a bit too small

perhaps try to replicate her right arm similar to her left, so it gives off the indication that she has her arms wrapped around her body (which would also be useful as a natural border for her chest)

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but ye other than those things it's actually really good! I like your style

Wow! Thank you!
I knew there was something off with that shoulder and yeah the lips were bugging me a lot

 

[Pokemanz]

Needs more chickens
Other than that it's GORGEOUS
Bewbz lel

 

[Sanaki]

really nice! just the lips need to be a little more defined/shaped. Possibly have the boobs reshaped a bit as they look a little unproportional. However, it's really nice ^^