Kawaii/Moe Art Critique and Pricing!

[riinasuu]

I'm hoping to get some friendly critique for my art and a pricing since I'm thinking of selling some!
There are a lot of things I know is flawed in my artwork such as anatomy and shading but would like
to know what do you think is good or bad;;;

I couldn't show them as images so URL was the next best thing xD
Thanks for the help!

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http://pre06.deviantart.net/35d0/th/pre/i/2015/271/8/1/vanilla_s_serenity_by_riinasuu-d9b7r7b.png
http://pre10.deviantart.net/d373/th/pre/i/2015/247/7/7/euphoria_by_riinasuu-d98b4pk.png
http://pre15.deviantart.net/bcfd/th/pre/i/2015/148/a/b/_at__magihime_by_riinasuu-d8v20co.png
http://pre13.deviantart.net/1d3d/th/pre/i/2015/180/1/0/290615_by_riinasuu-d8z7n1v.png
http://img07.deviantart.net/053c/i/2015/183/c/4/_cm__emiitea_by_riinasuu-d8zn4jo.png

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[Bloobloop]

Holy cow, this is crazy good! I think the anatomy is great!

 

[Pokemanz]

HOLY CHEESE your art is amazing! That first one omg it's so incredible it could easily go for over 1k TBT! I'd have to say your art deserves at least 700 TBT as a base price. The detail and everything wow <3

Do you draw males by any chance? If you ever open a shop I have an OC that would look adorable in your style.

 

[riinasuu]

Holy cow, this is crazy good! I think the anatomy is great!

Omggg thank youu! Maybe I'm a bit cynical because it's my own work.. xD
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HOLY CHEESE your art is amazing! That first one omg it's so incredible it could easily go for over 1k TBT! I'd have to say your art deserves at least 700 TBT as a base price. The detail and everything wow <3

Do you draw males by any chance? If you ever open a shop I have an OC that would look adorable in your style.

aaaaaa- thank you thank you! I think I have a good idea how I'll make my shop;; xD
and omgg 1k TBT? I can only dream of that! xD

and I do draw males though I haven't in a while so their anatomy is a little rough with me, bust wise;;
though chibis would be a lot easier considering they don't have much of a manly appearance in shape xD​

 

[Roxi]

Woaahhh!

Your art is incredible!! So darn cute! x3

If i had the tbt I would easy pay 1k for your art, I would save until I could haha!

Super talented ^-^

 

[Shirohibiki]

i agree with 700+ especially for those full busts your art is fantastic!

 

[cinny]

omg, your art are beautiful and cute!!
I am so broke with tbt but would req your art for irl money... if I was not broke irl too lmao.

 

[Miharu]

Your art is gorgeous and too cute!!! ; v; I would definitely pay 1k+ for them ahhhh!!!! I really can't give you any C+C because it's just amazing in my eyes!! ; v ;

 

[riinasuu]

Woaahhh!

Your art is incredible!! So darn cute! x3

If i had the tbt I would easy pay 1k for your art, I would save until I could haha!

Super talented ^-^

thank you! it means a lot to me! <3
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i agree with 700+ especially for those full busts your art is fantastic!

Thank you omggg! I'm happy everyone thinks so highly of my work <3
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omg, your art are beautiful and cute!!
I am so broke with tbt but would req your art for irl money... if I was not broke irl too lmao.

I might open it for irl money too in the future once I get to working on my art shop
thank you for the compliment! <3
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Your art is gorgeous and too cute!!! ; v; I would definitely pay 1k+ for them ahhhh!!!! I really can't give you any C+C because it's just amazing in my eyes!! ; v ;

omgggg;; thank you for the tip, eeeeeee---
I'll take it into consideration! <3
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[Kairi-Kitten]

Ditto all the comments, def. working now on saving for when you open haha xD

 

[crystalmilktea]

Definitely around 1k or more, especially with a background *v* open a shop in the Museum Shop!

 

[Jint]

./keeping an eye out for your shop too 6 u 6)b
your first piece's really pretty hehehh www
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[boujee]

The coloring in the second one and last one looks nice, sparkly.
But then once you look at it after while it starts to look weird. Especially the last one, her head is bigger than her body.
The bust piece with the brown light hair coloring looks painty and her hand is small.
Overall everything is cute.
For tbt, depends cause you're offering a lot such as chibi's with and without background(same goes with the half busts).

For chibi's:
400tbt (plus 100 for background and charge more base off complexity)

For busts:
600tbt-700tbt(200 for background since it's a much larger piece and charge more base off complexity).

You can also price your own stuff but also be reasonable for a lot of people don't have 1k+

 

[GalacticGhost]

Wow, these are amazing! I'd definitely pay 700+ TBT for these if I had enough TBT ;-;, they're so cute! I especially love the first one!

I did notice that in the third one, the girl looks like she has five fingers on her hand, though. And the finger that is sticking out looks as if it's bent backwards.

In the fourth one, I think the legs are a little too far apart. The girl's right leg looks fine, but her left one looks a little odd.

Apart from that, these are really good! I can't wait until you set up a shop! I just hope I can actually afford a drawing like this XD

 

[Nightmares]

*cries because I won't be able to afford any art if you make a shop*

 

[riinasuu]

Ditto all the comments, def. working now on saving for when you open haha xD

omg thank youuu! <3
It means a lot to me since I really enjoy the beautiful graphics you make * ^ *​

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Definitely around 1k or more, especially with a background *v* open a shop in the Museum Shop!

eeeeee-- thank you! I will soon!
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./keeping an eye out for your shop too 6 u 6)b
your first piece's really pretty hehehh www
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omg thank you! ;;;
I really like it too! xD
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[Luxanna]

the first piece I would easily throw out my tbt,
Easily 1k tbt <3

 

[visibleghost]

i'm going to scream you're sO GOOd aaaAA!!
the third one looks a tiny bit awkward w anatomy n stuff, but st IL L aaAAAAAAAAAAAA

 

[riinasuu]

The coloring in the second one and last one looks nice, sparkly.
But then once you look at it after while it starts to look weird. Especially the last one, her head is bigger than her body.
The bust piece with the brown light hair coloring looks painty and her hand is small.
Overall everything is cute.
For tbt, depends cause you're offering a lot such as chibi's with and without background(same goes with the half busts).

For chibi's:
400tbt (plus 100 for background and charge more base off complexity)

For busts:
600tbt-700tbt(200 for background since it's a much larger piece and charge more base off complexity).

You can also price your own stuff but also be reasonable for a lot of people don't have 1k+

thank you for the critique! Yeah I realised the size of the hand at the end when I uploaded it and noticed it was extremely small compared to her face. As well as the chibis, I'm trying to develop a few different sizes for them too and yeah the heads are really big compared to the body xD

I also don't want to sell them for a lot so though people can't get any but I'm thinking of doing raffles once in a while so anyone can get a chance to win something even if they don't have enough;;
thank you for the help!
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Wow, these are amazing! I'd definitely pay 700+ TBT for these if I had enough TBT ;-;, they're so cute! I especially love the first one!

I did notice that in the third one, the girl looks like she has five fingers on her hand, though. And the finger that is sticking out looks as if it's bent backwards.

In the fourth one, I think the legs are a little too far apart. The girl's right leg looks fine, but her left one looks a little odd.

Apart from that, these are really good! I can't wait until you set up a shop! I just hope I can actually afford a drawing like this XD

yeah the 6 fingers! XD
my bf noticed it when I had uploaded it and didn't notice it all;; I laughed a lot when I saw it
and the finger too, I'll have to keep an eye out on weird bent items on bodies.

same with legs, I'll just have to keep an eye out for them too xD
thank you for the critique!

I'll probably give out raffles for those who can't afford them but would like to get something;;
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*cries because I won't be able to afford any art if you make a shop*

I'm thinking of adding an occasional raffle into it too so everyone can get a chance to win something!
I'm glad you like it so much though <3
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the first piece I would easily throw out my tbt,
Easily 1k tbt <3

thank youuu!
I'm thinking of making that an auction since I don't really draw busts
though I'll probably try to make it an occasional thing after a while!
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i'm going to scream you're sO GOOd aaaAA!!
the third one looks a tiny bit awkward w anatomy n stuff, but st IL L aaAAAAAAAAAAAA

omg thank youuu! <33
it means a lot!

and yeah, I need to work on my anatomy a lot, I've been trying to use different references for angles, positioning, etc.
I'm hoping I'll improve a lot with it by doing it this way
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[Llust]

oh my goddd, your art style is adorable asdfgghjkll; ಥ_ಥ
id pay literally anything for that - the minimum id pay is 1k and a max of 6k tbt. as for rlc, if we're talking reasonable deviantart pricing, i'd pay $20-50
i'd love you if you give me pointers on drawing ;v;