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[Tinkalila]

hey what's up! i'd love if you could critique my work. i'm 18 and i'll be going to art college as an illustration major starting in a few months. here's my work, you can critique any pieces that you think you should! http://tinkaliladraws.weebly.com/

 

[Croconaw]

Here are my two drawings. I haven?t drawn in a while, so these are from a few years ago. I may start drawing again, and would love critique on these seeing as they?re my most recent.

https://imgur.com/a/hiPrx4K

 

[calamitybot]

Here are my two drawings. I haven’t drawn in a while, so these are from a few years ago. I may start drawing again, and would love critique on these seeing as they’re my most recent.

https://imgur.com/a/hiPrx4K

I don't have too much to say on these.
1. These both look like they've been "traced", or like you were trying to replicate exactly what the original drawings looked like. Don't do that. Try to draw from imagination.
2. The attempt at shading falls flat. I'm a broken record at this point, but do some studies of real life objects to improve.

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hey what's up! i'd love if you could critique my work. i'm 18 and i'll be going to art college as an illustration major starting in a few months. here's my work, you can critique any pieces that you think you should! http://tinkaliladraws.weebly.com/

1. Your strong suit is clean design and color. All of your illustrations are very smooth and appealing to the eye.
2. You're weakest in drawing and diversifying what the subject of your work is. Almost everything you have in your illustrations are cute anime girls, and your realism doesn't look like realism. Like I've said plenty enough in this thread, draw from life more and learn the fundamentals of art.

 

[Plumb3r]

I?ve been practicing a bit with my art and seeing what I could do to improve on it, so I think I would like a bit of critique. Here are a few art pieces I?ve made recently and I want to hear your honest opinion on them.
http://colorslive.com/details/4061538
http://colorslive.com/details/4047086
http://colorslive.com/details/4046029

 

[Tinkalila]

I don't have too much to say on these.
1. These both look like they've been "traced", or like you were trying to replicate exactly what the original drawings looked like. Don't do that. Try to draw from imagination.
2. The attempt at shading falls flat. I'm a broken record at this point, but do some studies of real life objects to improve.

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1. Your strong suit is clean design and color. All of your illustrations are very smooth and appealing to the eye.
2. You're weakest in drawing and diversifying what the subject of your work is. Almost everything you have in your illustrations are cute anime girls, and your realism doesn't look like realism. Like I've said plenty enough in this thread, draw from life more and learn the fundamentals of art.

thank you for the critique!