Looking for (more) critique

[WalceDony]

About a week ago I uploaded some artwork here and asked for some feedback on the piece. The main feedback was essentially "more shading" & "try to make it look more clean". I have been trying to improve my style and have made several pieces since then, but only one that I think deserves to be uploaded here. I am happy with the piece but just like last time: I appreciate ALL feedback, but please try to look for the negative parts or just bits you dislike about my piece.

Previous thread: https://www.belltreeforums.com/threads/looking-for-feedback.567052/#post-9495076

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[nightxshift]

That looks super cute! Maybe try to make the hair line art the same colour, so in this case, the line art would be dark pink, a fucsia colour and for the clothing, black looks nice. More shadowing in the face and more details would also make ur pixels look better!

 

[WalceDony]

That looks super cute! Maybe try to make the hair line art the same colour, so in this case, the line art would be dark pink, a fucsia colour and for the clothing, black looks nice. More shadowing in the face and more details would also make ur pixels look better!

Thank you I did actually try to put shading across the face but I guess it does look way too subtle