My Background for..

[Josh]

Yesterday i made a background for my title screen for my rpg called
a tale of nintendo. Just wanted to see if it is alright.

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I got the renders for planetrenders.

Tell me what you think.

 

[DevilGopher]

Looks good, but maybe without the red outlines?

 

[Josh]

Thanks. I'll try and compare it with and without the lines

 

[Conor]

Its actually alright..
Not too fond on the red outline on all the characters though.

 

[Josh]

Thanks conor. I'll try and take it off

 

[NikoKing]

Eh..... It just looks a big brush mess, I use a gradient then smudge a lot of it till' it looks cool with a funky smudge brush then I mess around with signature techniques. But this just looks like you used Grunge brushes :\

 

[Josh]

k ty for cc

 

[DevilGopher]

Also, the bg colour doesnt really go good with the title, so maybe a different colour or something

 

[Josh]

Like what? I was stuck on the colour