My Poem On Women

[Beary]

This is wrong. You are addressing the stereotypes. I like smart guys. Not dumb ones.
This is all wrong, and offensive. If you want to vent...DONT DO IT ON A FORUM!

 

[!K0dy!]

I'm sorry I'm not offended(im a guy) but I have a little tingle of offence
That this is a HIGH offence to most women. I ho.early have not met any
Girls/women like this. I honestly feel that these kind of vents shouldn't really
Be on A mainly female populated forum(facts from the males/females poll).
Men may agree with this but I think most women are probably going to be offended
By this. Like what Beary509 said. This is mainly stereotypical.

 

[iLoveYou]

To be honest I am very much like the woman in the poem. I don't really feel insulted, but I can see why others do.

I actually like the poem a lot. {: Very nicely done. It completely features who I am. I am not shamed to say it.

 

[puppy]

you actualLY CALLEd WOMEN FILthY HOEs

 

[treebd]

Well written, but its all against women.

 

[oath2order]

how much do i wanna bet that you wear a fedora

Fighting stereotypes with stereotypes. Nice.

my poem on men like you
these men are babies who cry and try to make an offensive poem about women because they cant get a girlfriend so they "vent" (hint an excuse to be a jerk) and then post it to a forum and then they ask for feedback but then reply "dont take it so seriously"

At least his poem had a decent structure to it.

Your poem is ****.

 

[Zeiro]

At least his poem had a decent structure to it.

Your poem is ****.

I challenge you to write a better one.

 

[Redacted]

Fighting stereotypes with stereotypes. Nice.



At least his poem had a decent structure to it.

Your poem is ****.

Yeah, there's no rhyme scheme to it. Not very grammatically accurate either... 4/10.

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To be honest I am very much like the woman in the poem. I don't really feel insulted, but I can see why others do.

I actually like the poem a lot. {: Very nicely done. It completely features who I am. I am not shamed to say it.

Thanks. The things with stereotypes is that there does tend to be some truth in them, but only to a certain extent. People say all jocks are dumb and while most are, there are the occasional exceptions.

 

[BellGreen]

This poem was really misleading but honestly I thought it was pretty good besides the stereotypical opinion.
It might be because I'm a guy, but it's honestly not that bad if you take the fact that he was just venting.

Come on, everyone has judged someone stereotypically one point in their life and we all learn that it's not OK to do a lot.

 

[oath2order]

I challenge you to write a better one.

There once was a woman from Tree
Who took the role of the emcee
"Lynch this man, he's scum,
His poem makes me numb."
Those were the cries of the banshee.

 

[Zeiro]

There once was a woman from Tree
Who took the role of the emcee
"Lynch this man, he's scum,
His poem makes me numb."
Those were the cries of the banshee.

 

[radical6]

Fighting stereotypes with stereotypes. Nice.



At least his poem had a decent structure to it.

Your poem is ****.

but its true. it reeks of fedoras.
my poem is beautiful and way better than yours your poem smells like dog poop

 

[oath2order]

 

[Redacted]

There once was a woman from Tree
Who took the role of the emcee
"Lynch this man, he's scum,
His poem makes me numb."
Those were the cries of the banshee.

Very well written; far superior to the insult poem above. 9.5/10 good job.

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A great idea at this point. This whole thread was a bad move on my part...

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but its true. it reeks of fedoras.
my poem is beautiful and way better than yours your poem smells like dog poop

She claims his poem reeks of stool
Wow, what a fool!
The poem was crafted with skill and grace
You could tell by the jealous look on her face.

 

[oath2order]

Very well written; far superior to the insult poem above. 9.5/10 good job.

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A great idea at this point. This whole thread was a bad move on my part...

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She claims his poem reeks of stool
Wow, what a fool!
The poem was crafted with skill and grace
You could tell by the jealous look on her face.

Me reaction

 

[rosiekitty405]

... I'm not too offended. Just not a big fan of the stereotypes. But great
Writing,structure,etc. I can see why people are offended though.

 

[reyy]

I can see why women wouldn't like you.
this is incredibly rude, we arent all the devil's insistence and some of us are actually nice.

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It was a terrible move making this thread.
Quite sexist in my opinion

 

[VioletPrincess]

"Women Are The Source Of All Evil" ???????

 

[reyy]

This poem sent a shudder down her spine
All were rude, every line
Towards the women stereotype
''Thats enough internet for today.''
[For the love of god, why the **** did you post this.. You've offended so many people]

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Women are not the source of all evil
Look at men
Some men are evil some are sweet and kind
Just.. just.. I hate you and I hope no girl ever wants to date you.
Keeping this for further note, if you ever find a girl who actually 'likes' you i'll show this poem to her

 

[beffa]

I'm not easily offended, but this whole thing is just plain ignorant. Especially the title.

I'm sure 100% of this could be applied to particular males too…

Such hatred towards the men of purity, that all women despise;

All women despise men of purity? What? I'm sure women are equally as pressured to be 'pure' or perhaps the opposite in some situations as men.

You see, women like men who tease and flirt- as they oddly enough crave being treated like dirt

Yep I can personally say that's a load of **** because I've had a guy doing this to me before and it's **** bye

Appearance takes priority, followd by girth

Well this is plain ignorant and stupid. MOST girls don't care about a guys' looks as specifically as most males do. And GIRTH?! Is that inappropriate or what? Pretty sure guys are looking for huge arses and breasts (or small arses and breasts, it's generally specific to different men) nowadays.