Need critique & pricing

[Llust]

Critiques will be much appreciated as well as tbt pricing and whether or not you'd pay rlc

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I draw using paint tool sai with a bamboo drawing pad It's pretty old and doesn't work as well as other drawing pads, but it gets the work done and that's all I need. This drawing is pretty rushed so I know there are a few out of place colors here and there--other than that, try not to hold back on any harsh comments. As long as you feel like they're helpful, I won't mind

 

[axo]

It's really pretty, I suck at pricing so I'll just critique. I just feel like for some reason the eyes don't fit well with the rest or the picture, I know that they're supposed to stand out, but something feels a bit off. Other than that, I would totally buy it.

 

[iamnothyper]

i really like the colors ;D

one thing i noticed was the legs. its odd how they curve in at the top so much? i get that maybe its the knees, but it just looks weird to me? if its a style thing then don't mind me~

i would def buy, but i suck at pricing so i'll leave that to the others

 

[Llust]

i really like the colors ;D

one thing i noticed was the legs. its odd how they curve in at the top so much? i get that maybe its the knees, but it just looks weird to me? if its a style thing then don't mind me~

i would def buy, but i suck at pricing so i'll leave that to the others

i probably should have added some folds where the thighs are but yeah right above the dress is the knee cap

 

[himeki]

give me you art now

 

[Albuns]

THIS.
This was RUSHED?
Golly, you're scary good! xD

 

[Llust]

give me you art now

THIS.
This was RUSHED?
Golly, you're scary good! xD

ahh - you guys are too kind haha ^^; tysm

 

[Splendor]

I've never bought art before, so I don't know about pricing. I think it is possible to sell your art for rlc as well as tbt. I gyess if you open a shop, maybe let people offer the price? Idk xD Since I don't see anyone pricing. But I would like one if you open a shop, I like your style and the eyes I feel look nice that way (*∩ω∩) It looks very innocent xD

 

[Keitara]

aww I think it looks lovely!! It gives off a special atmosphere with the colors c: I like that!

-lame critique-
Overall I think I'd add detailed hands and feets instead of umm "clumps"? (sorry I have a hard time finding a better word :x)
I'd also add more details to the face. A slight line for a nose? Eyebrows? Eyefolds? The mouth seems to be a bit too low too. The face outline also seems a bit wonky, compared to the placement of the eyes. Furthermore the dress' folds seem a bit unrealistic and it looks stiff. The coloring seems not to be 100% clean (mainly around sharp edges), the shadows do look a bit wonky (for example on the hair clips) and unrealistic too. Don't forget that they flow together with each other, and remember that folds aren't just lines, imagine them as 3d folds (sorry I probably don't make any sense ;;
and umm some colors for the outlines do not fit, for example the red ribbons. their outlines are bright purple, and I personally think those colors don't compliment each other well. The ponytails look a bit stiff as well, make them more flowy and add individual strands to make it look messier, it will give the drawing some energy! Same goes for more interesting poses than l standing. But maybe that's just my preference, other people might prefer it differently Hopefully that helps here and there! ^^

for tbt- I would say 350-450 TBT? ; O ; sorry if that pricing is bad, it's just a price I'd be comfortable to pay with ^^

but in general, keep it up!! You have talent there ; O ; I really like your style too!!

 

[Albuns]

ahh - you guys are too kind haha ^^; tysm

I'm not too kind, you're just too good~ ^^

 

[Llust]

aww I think it looks lovely!! It gives off a special atmosphere with the colors c: I like that!

-lame critique-
Overall I think I'd add detailed hands and feets instead of umm "clumps"? (sorry I have a hard time finding a better word :x)
I'd also add more details to the face. A slight line for a nose? Eyebrows? Eyefolds? The mouth seems to be a bit too low too. The face outline also seems a bit wonky, compared to the placement of the eyes. Furthermore the dress' folds seem a bit unrealistic and it looks stiff. The coloring seems not to be 100% clean (mainly around sharp edges), the shadows do look a bit wonky (for example on the hair clips) and unrealistic too. Don't forget that they flow together with each other, and remember that folds aren't just lines, imagine them as 3d folds (sorry I probably don't make any sense ;;
and umm some colors for the outlines do not fit, for example the red ribbons. their outlines are bright purple, and I personally think those colors don't compliment each other well. The ponytails look a bit stiff as well, make them more flowy and add individual strands to make it look messier, it will give the drawing some energy! Same goes for more interesting poses than l standing. But maybe that's just my preference, other people might prefer it differently Hopefully that helps here and there! ^^

for tbt- I would say 350-450 TBT? ; O ; sorry if that pricing is bad, it's just a price I'd be comfortable to pay with ^^

but in general, keep it up!! You have talent there ; O ; I really like your style too!!

thank you c: i'll keep your advice in mind, it was very helpful
im terrible with hands & feet so i typically dont include them in my drawings, but i intend on practicing on them sooner or later--i agree that it would look better if she actually had toes and fingers

 

[Keitara]

thank you c: i'll keep your advice in mind, it was very helpful
im terrible with hands & feet so i typically dont include them in my drawings, but i intend on practicing on them sooner or later--i agree that it would look better if she actually had toes and fingers

no problem! I'm glad it was helpful ^^''
yes I know they're always tricky at the beginning ;-; but I'm sure you can do it! Ganbatte Soushi ;D
not sure if you did but I'd also sketch things out before lining and flip it from time to time to discover wonky places.
and I forgot to add, I think you have RLC potencial! I'd just work on those few things, make a few good examples and then you could try to sell. I think it's important your art shows quality, RLC is not a thing what should be rushed, (yeah Keitara, take a lesson with that lol) take your time with preparing unless you are not in a pinch with money