need opinions on my chibi (very first one) ~

[timecapsule]

I totally agree. I appreciate the feedback!!! any tips?

Well, when drawing hair you gotta remember it goes all the way around the head.. So I usually make it look that way by adding a neck and a small line from the tip of the hair that's currently there.
The best way to tell you is to show you:


lazily filled in

It looks better with a neck, imo. Anyways, I think they're super cute!

 

[Rasha]

the eyes are cute, however I wouldn't buy it
why are the cheeks' colours on her hair?

 

[teto]

I think it does look better with a neck, but if the rest of the hair is spiky, shouldn't the hair around her neck be spiky too?

 

[timecapsule]

I think it does look better with a neck, but if the rest of the hair is spiky, shouldn't the hair around her neck be spiky too?

ah yeah, it's just an example and I'm lazy XD

 

[teto]

ah yeah, it's just an example and I'm lazy XD

Ah okay!