Need some feedback.

[Fabioisonfire]

Hey everyone. I need some feedback on a video I made. It's not anything amazing, I was just testing everything out. (Things that could be used in a short comedy similar to the ones Smosh makes.) I have dial-up currently, so it's hard as hell to do anything- I haven't seen any of the new Smosh videos since Food Battle 2006, so bare with me here. I've filmed before, but mostly video game stuff.

Just created the YouTube profile, and no, I am not 26. Here's the link. Good or bad, I'd like to know what you think for a first timer. (And yes, it's me.)

My friends liked it:

'dude, not everybody knows smosh. lol
I'm loading it...

DUDE!
You look so freakin different from like... 3 years ago!
haha
So does... holy hell... is that Dea!? (spelling?)
WOW
hahaha
I love the music when you're putting your head up. LOL

lmfao!
That was freakin awesome dude.
Hahaha I loved the ending when you slapped her and it went black.
lmfao
keep it up man!'

 

[DarthGohan1]

It's OK... I didn't really like the music though...

The slo-mo beat-up is nice.

 

[UltraByte]

Yeah, IMO, the music didn't fit in at all.

It was kinda funny, though. Try making it a bit longer next time.

 

[Fabioisonfire]

Here is the new video. I like it more.

 

[UltraByte]

Lolness.

I love how you made you the only actor. xD

 

[Fabioisonfire]

It's funnier that way.

 

[ƒish]

umm... wow...