New Sig OK

[Papa Smurf]

Hey guys, haven't been on TBT for a long time. It's been months since I last made a sig and I was bored so I made this and I wanted to show somebody so here you go.

Now let the criticism begin! (P.S. my xbox live gamertag is PendingRage so that's why it says that )​

 

[Caius]

I like it. It's got some nice color composition and good balance between shadows and white, the only thing that bothers me is the text is a little too blotted out, and most of your focal point is lost by having the main part of it directly in the center. I can't find the graph right now, but if your eyes are drawn in more of a circular pattern to find the focal point of the image, you can create some stunning stuff that continues to captivate and surprise after the first look.

All in all I still really like this.

 

[Jas0n]

Overall it's a pretty nice sig, but I dislike how dark the focal point is. I tend to find my eyes leaning more towards the flashy effects than the focal point itself because of how "blended in" it is.

 

[Marcus]

I actually think the text is perfect. Very nice border to, that hasn't been mentioned yet. But as Jason said, the focal point should usually be lighter than the rest of the sig.

 

[Josh]

Overall it's a pretty nice sig, but I dislike how dark the focal point is. I tend to find my eyes leaning more towards the flashy effects than the focal point itself because of how "blended in" it is.

This basically, Not trying to copy people or anything but this is true.

 

[SilentHopes]

I don't really like the border, just looks kinda 'out-there'. Font doesn't really appeal to me, but overall, good work.

 

[Thunder]

The font would be good if it wasn't as faded, it looks good a little faded, but if you fade it too much you can hardly see it =P

I don't really like how the effects look, but this is mostly just personal preference.

 

[muffun]

Well pretty much everything I wanted to say has been said already. And I'm not one for redundancy.

But don't smudge/place effects so that it just looks like a head popping out, because...that's odd.

Also try moving the text to the bottom left part of the render, text usually looks better when it's touching the render, even barely.

 

[bloop2424]

It is a very great signature.
The only problem, as everyone said, is how you made the focal dark
I can see you know how to make a focal and everything, but it would be better to lighten the focal more

 

[Papa Smurf]

Thanks everyone for the constructive criticism, I agree, I drowned the focal point big time and screwed the text aswell. But hey, it was a nice attempt.

 

[PoxyLemon]

Words cannot describe it but this gif can

 

[Marc Franks]

Hey guys, haven't been on TBT for a long time. It's been months since I last made a sig and I was bored so I made this and I wanted to show somebody so here you go.

Now let the criticism begin! (P.S. my xbox live gamertag is PendingRage so that's why it says that )​

what program did you use?

 

[Vex L'Cour]

Overall it's a pretty nice sig, but I dislike how dark the focal point is. I tend to find my eyes leaning more towards the flashy effects than the focal point itself because of how "blended in" it is.

This.

 

[Papa Smurf]

what program did you use?

Gimp

 

[Jake]

Pretty good, 7.5/10

 

[Marc Franks]

i Like et :3