Each one gets better than the one before. Frankly, the first one you posted here was, well, plain. It had nothing special about it. When you first added Nights, it gave it more character, but it seemed really flat. It was like looking at an old Viewmaster image.. the foreground was one 2 dimensional image, and the background was another flat plane. This time, the background is gaining depth and interest, and the foreground of Nights is looking like it belongs in the image more.
The Lucid dreams text is getting lost now. Bring it out with a little flair and you should have it.