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All it took was one mistake, and everything turned upside down. All it took was one lie, and everything had disappeared forever. All it took was one truth, and everything returned. -Hotaru-

Fireflies surrounded me as I walked through the night at the somewhat bright graveyard. I not sure why fireflies follow me at night, but I find it kinda peaceful. No cloud was to be seen anywhere up the sky. I had this special feeling in my gut, that I was being followed. Suddenly the fireflies flew away, then the early peak of dawn had arrived.

As lonely as I was, I felt safe being alone. Alone made me feel unique inside, like I was the last human alive. But I wasn't. Apparently there are only five living humans left in the entire universe. I was one of the five, and I was lucky to be a human girl. Because that would meant I can reproduce. So in the next century there would be at least 100 children alive.

"Hey Hotaru! Come over here!" My best friend, Miyo, sprinted over to me. She represented the beautiful human, where her beauty was so strong not even death can grab it.

"Hey Miyo," I confirmed mysteriously. I represented the quiet, mysterious human, where I keep the darkest of secrets.

Then there's Luciano, who is the talented, social human. Where he has a gift at everything, and he loves to socialize. But sometimes he can be a bit flirty to women like us.

There two more humans, who we are not sure of at this moment.

On planet Coaline it is populated by vampires, elves, wizards, and angels. Since there are only five of us left, we are an protected species, so no one can hurt us.

Theres another planet, full of un-dead humans. The planet is called Earth. Now on Earth, if you die on that planet, you become one of the undead. No I am not talking about vampires or zombies, there is a curse on Earth that was put on that planet 200 years ago. The curse turns you, into a soulless ghoul.

How do I know about all of this infomation? Easy, my uncle Kuro told me before he died when I was 10. That was six years ago.

"Hey do you know Luciano?" Miyo questioned confidently, while tying her shoelaces.

"The one who you mentioned thousands of times?" I said stubbornly while resisting the sun's powerful rays.

"Yeah, he wants to ask you out!" She shrieked excitedly.

"Pff yeah right, who would want a girl like me?" I stood up, cleaning my shirt with my handkerchief.

"Damn it! I can never trick you!"

Hello Viewers,

Who wants to be in this story? If you do then post a description of your character. It does not have to be the real you in this story. Hopefully I will find the right character for my story. Description must include:

First Name.
Age.
Hair Colour.
Height.
Favorite Colour.
Eye Colour.
Skin Colour.
Species.
Little description of their past and how they got on Coaline.

Good luck!
Kumarock
P.S I will post more of the story after I get the character entries settled.
P.P.S Also there are only 7 roles (2 major roles and 5 minor roles) left for sale so write in fast!
 
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First Name: "Doll"
Age: 11
Hair Colour: Pink
Height: 4' 5"
Favorite Colour: White
Eye Colour: Red
Skin Colour: Very pale
Species: Angel/ Demon.
Little description of their past and how they got on Coaline.
During a great war between angels and demons an unholy affair happened between a pink haired angel named Sai, and a fox shaped demon named Kanjo. They ended up falling in love with each other after Sai saved Kanjo after he had his tail cut off. Despite Sai being very poor and Kanjo being very rich, the two still managed to evade the gunfire and see each other in secret. However, a problem arose when Sai ends up pregnant with Kanjo's child. For the good of the baby, the couple split up, never to see each other again.
However, the king of the angels smelt the blood of a demon in the baby, and Sai was stripped of her wings and banished to the physical world. Not knowing the harshness of the terrain, Sai died before she could even name her baby. The baby was on the brink of death until she mysteriously shifted into a fox. She was taken in by a family of foxes until her mother fox finally died when she was 11. The girl was never given a specific name, but those who see her often call her "Doll" because of her rosy cheeks and slight smile. She only appears to create mischief before disappearing into the trees.
She wanders around Coaline searching to the secrets of her past so that she can discover what her purpose is.
 
First Name: "Doll"
Age: 11
Hair Colour: Pink
Height: 4' 5"
Favorite Colour: White
Eye Colour: Red
Skin Colour: Very pale
Species: Angel/ Demon.
Little description of their past and how they got on Coaline.
During a great war between angels and demons an unholy affair happened between a pink haired angel named Sai, and a fox shaped demon named Kanjo. They ended up falling in love with each other after Sai saved Kanjo after he had his tail cut off. Despite Sai being very poor and Kanjo being very rich, the two still managed to evade the gunfire and see each other in secret. However, a problem arose when Sai ends up pregnant with Kanjo's child. For the good of the baby, the couple split up, never to see each other again.
However, the king of the angels smelt the blood of a demon in the baby, and Sai was stripped of her wings and banished to the physical world. Not knowing the harshness of the terrain, Sai died before she could even name her baby. The baby was on the brink of death until she mysteriously shifted into a fox. She was taken in by a family of foxes until her mother fox finally died when she was 11. The girl was never given a specific name, but those who see her often call her "Doll" because of her rosy cheeks and slight smile. She only appears to create mischief before disappearing into the trees.
She wanders around Coaline searching to the secrets of her past so that she can discover what her purpose is.
Wow! Such a brilliant character! I'll definitely use this in my novel. Now the only question with your character is, should it be a major character or a minor character? I'll decide myself.
 
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First Name. Ellii Voss
Age. 16
Hair Colour. Black
Height. 5' 3''
Favorite Colour. Green
Eye Colour. Bright Green
Skin Colour. White
Species. Elf
Little description of their past and how they got on Coaline.
Born into the royal family of Elves, Elli grew up ignorant of the world around her. All she knew was happiness. That all changed on her 13th birthday, the day known as the "Day of Blood". In the small but prosperous kingdom, an army of Vampires (or whatever you want as an enemy) took to the skies in search for the girl, to kill her. Many elves of the kingdom lost their lives but Ellii somehow managed to get away with the help of her caretaker. It seems that her blood holds the key to mortal life. (Her blood can turn a Vampire mortal and there is a group of people who have been waiting for her to mature so they can harvest her blood and "free" the vampires from their "curse", many of which do not want that to happen. Technically her blood can turn anyone mortal...). In the 3 years after the Day of Blood, Ellii has become skilled in the art of Vampire hunting, thanks to the group who wanted her alive, and uses her own blood as a weapon.


I can change anything you want or if you don't like the character I can make a new one. What do you think?


Edit: She if often cold and aloof since the massacre but when it comes to killing vampires, she's very vocal if it means saving people.
 
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First Name. Ellii Voss
Age. 16
Hair Colour. Black
Height. 5' 3''
Favorite Colour. Green
Eye Colour. Bright Green
Skin Colour. White
Species. Elf
Little description of their past and how they got on Coaline.
Born into the royal family of Elves, Elli grew up ignorant of the world around her. All she knew was happiness. That all changed on her 13th birthday, the day known as the "Day of Blood". In the small but prosperous kingdom, an army of Vampires (or whatever you want as an enemy) took to the skies in search for the girl, to kill her. Many elves of the kingdom lost their lives but Ellii somehow managed to get away with the help of her caretaker. It seems that her blood holds the key to mortal life. (Her blood can turn a Vampire mortal and there is a group of people who have been waiting for her to mature so they can harvest her blood and "free" the vampires from their "curse", many of which do not want that to happen. Technically her blood can turn anyone mortal...). In the 3 years after the Day of Blood, Ellii has become skilled in the art of Vampire hunting, thanks to the group who wanted her alive, and uses her own blood as a weapon.


I can change anything you want or if you don't like the character I can make a new one. What do you think?
OMG that makes me think of Vampire Knight sort of. The way you described the character was awesome! I would love it if you made another character aswell, so I can decide on which character I should use. :3 I'm a decider today. :3 :3
 
OMG that makes me think of Vampire Knight sort of. The way you described the character was awesome! I would love it if you made another character aswell, so I can decide on which character I should use. :3 I'm a decider today. :3 :3

Haha really? Maybe I should read/watch Vampire Knight...
Okay I'll create another for you....

First Name. Rumine (pronounced Lu - me - ney)
Age. 14
Hair Colour. Silver
Height. 4' 10''
Favorite Colour. Purple
Eye Colour. Blue-green
Skin Colour. Tan
Species. Wizard (witch)
Little description of their past and how they got on Coaline.
A wizard (witch) in training, Rumine is very quick to think when it comes to the arts of magic. In an accident last year, she lost her ability to speak (a spell gone wrong). That doesn't stop her from being able to communicate though! Rumine is spunky and very interested in the magical world. Currently she is studying protection magic and rune magic as she has already mastered transfiguration, or the ability to transform or transform objects. She is apprenticed to a prodigy wizard and much is expected of her. At times she likes to be alone and do her own studies and make up her own spells. Although she loves learning magic, she wishes for an adventure and to make friends. She also has a pet kitty named Binx.


Any good? I can add information if you feel I need to.
 
Haha really? Maybe I should read/watch Vampire Knight...
Okay I'll create another for you....

First Name. Rumine (pronounced Lu - me - ney)
Age. 14
Hair Colour. Silver
Height. 4' 10''
Favorite Colour. Purple
Eye Colour. Blue-green
Skin Colour. Tan
Species. Wizard (witch)
Little description of their past and how they got on Coaline.
A wizard (witch) in training, Rumine is very quick to think when it comes to the arts of magic. In an accident last year, she lost her ability to speak (a spell gone wrong). That doesn't stop her from being able to communicate though! Rumine is spunky and very interested in the magical world. Currently she is studying protection magic and rune magic as she has already mastered transfiguration, or the ability to transform or transform objects. She is apprenticed to a prodigy wizard and much is expected of her. At times she likes to be alone and do her own studies and make up her own spells. Although she loves learning magic, she wishes for an adventure and to make friends. She also has a pet kitty named Binx.


Any good? I can add information if you feel I need to.

Hmmm... Interesting... I'll decide which character to choose okay?
 
Sure. You can change anything about the characters, they were just ideas for you to toy with :)
 
I have another one, but you are in no way obligated to use him. I just found a sketch that I did about a year ago, but I can't see him fitting into any of my stories, so I thought maybe you could have him.

First Name: If
Age: 300 (In his particular tribe, that's around 23)
Hair Colour: White
Height. Half of one meter.
Favorite Colour: Dark Gree
Eye Colour. Milky Blue.
Skin Colour. Sea Green
Species. Forest Elf
Little description of their past and how they got on Coaline:
Forest elves are notorious for being the smallest of the elves and the calmest. Many of their beliefs are similar to Tibetan monks as in they are very spiritual and live among the plants, and live a somewhat nomadic culture. There are also many different sects, but that's what pretty much all the tribes have in common.
If was born blind, but he was treated fairly nontheless despite his handicap. In a way, he could see. His connection through the forest allowed him to listen to the earth's voice and guide him to where the forest called. He was the apple of his father and mother's eyes, and even as a baby, he showed a natural talent for healing, which made it only natural for him to be a shaman.
However, when the forest started to run out of resources, it was time for the tribe to leave in order for the forest to replenish itself, but If couldn't leave. If he were to leave the forest and somehow wander into civilization, he could be left totally helpless, so he had no choice but to stay in the forest and wait for his tribe to return in another 800 years. He now spends much of his day meditating and aiding travelers who wander into the forest.
 
I have another one, but you are in no way obligated to use him. I just found a sketch that I did about a year ago, but I can't see him fitting into any of my stories, so I thought maybe you could have him.

First Name: If
Age: 300 (In his particular tribe, that's around 23)
Hair Colour: White
Height. Half of one meter.
Favorite Colour: Dark Gree
Eye Colour. Milky Blue.
Skin Colour. Sea Green
Species. Forest Elf
Little description of their past and how they got on Coaline:
Forest elves are notorious for being the smallest of the elves and the calmest. Many of their beliefs are similar to Tibetan monks as in they are very spiritual and live among the plants, and live a somewhat nomadic culture. There are also many different sects, but that's what pretty much all the tribes have in common.
If was born blind, but he was treated fairly nontheless despite his handicap. In a way, he could see. His connection through the forest allowed him to listen to the earth's voice and guide him to where the forest called. He was the apple of his father and mother's eyes, and even as a baby, he showed a natural talent for healing, which made it only natural for him to be a shaman.
However, when the forest started to run out of resources, it was time for the tribe to leave in order for the forest to replenish itself, but If couldn't leave. If he were to leave the forest and somehow wander into civilization, he could be left totally helpless, so he had no choice but to stay in the forest and wait for his tribe to return in another 800 years. He now spends much of his day meditating and aiding travelers who wander into the forest.
I'm not sure what obligated means. I checked my dictionary and it meant commit security. I was like what?! I'm only 12, so it's normal for me to not understand. Please explain for me.
Confused,
Kumarock11
 
I'm not sure what obligated means. I checked my dictionary and it meant commit security. I was like what?! I'm only 12, so it's normal for me to not understand. Please explain for me.
Confused,
Kumarock11

Obligated basically means that it is something that a person is required to do. Something that a person HAS to do because it is expected of them. So basically, you are not required to use Juicebox's character, nor my own.
 
Obligated basically means that it is something that a person is required to do. Something that a person HAS to do because it is expected of them. So basically, you are not required to use Juicebox's character, nor my own.
Oh okay, thanks. :) Whatever character I think is best I'll choose.
 
I'm not sure what obligated means. I checked my dictionary and it meant commit security. I was like what?! I'm only 12, so it's normal for me to not understand. Please explain for me.
Confused,
Kumarock11
An obligation means something that you are required to do. You aren't obligated to use the character which means, no hard feelings if you don't end up using him, because I don't expect you to.
 
Made this up five minutes ago off the top of my head. I'm not attached to him as he's essentially a random idea. If it helps you feel free to use it.

First Name: Theon
Age: 27
Hair Color: Black
Height: 6'2''
Favorite Color: White
Eye Color: Green
Skin Color: Slightly tan.
Species: Desert Elf
Description: A desert elf forsakes the serene, strict culture of his kin to wander the globe. He or she thinks ill of their kind, accusing them of hiding while the world goes on. They emigrate to the desert, a blistering expanse of dunes and survivalist groups. The desert alters their innate ability to interact with nature. Forced to conserve energy in the desert the desert elves have learned to siphon plant life with concentration and use this energy to briefly enhance their strength and endurance. Constant conditioning in this manner makes these elves bulkier. Most elect to use heavy weapons. With no prejudices against anyone but those they've deemed cowards, a desert elf has a unique sense of justice, electing to defend those victimized by the strong. They have no patience for those who brood. To a desert elf, those without a sense of purpose or who act indifferent are part of the problem.

Theon found a young girl six years ago on the edge of the desert. He nursed the fourteen year old girl back to health and taught her to survive. When she turned 20 the pair fell in love and became inseparable bandits. They left the desert and moved to a city of wizards. There he witnessed a skirmish between wizards and angels. Angels, deeming the black arts dangerous, decimated the research academy despite evidence of their magic protecting people. His love perished in the crossfire.

Theon, a harsh critic, an older man, and one who believes actions resounds more than words has become a wanderer. He is a defender of those who try to survive but are oppressed.
 
Made this up five minutes ago off the top of my head. I'm not attached to him as he's essentially a random idea. If it helps you feel free to use it.

First Name: Theon
Age: 27
Hair Color: Black
Height: 6'2''
Favorite Color: White
Eye Color: Green
Skin Color: Slightly tan.
Species: Desert Elf
Description: A desert elf forsakes the serene, strict culture of his kin to wander the globe. He or she thinks ill of their kind, accusing them of hiding while the world goes on. They emigrate to the desert, a blistering expanse of dunes and survivalist groups. The desert alters their innate ability to interact with nature. Forced to conserve energy in the desert the desert elves have learned to siphon plant life with concentration and use this energy to briefly enhance their strength and endurance. Constant conditioning in this manner makes these elves bulkier. Most elect to use heavy weapons. With no prejudices against anyone but those they've deemed cowards, a desert elf has a unique sense of justice, electing to defend those victimized by the strong. They have no patience for those who brood. To a desert elf, those without a sense of purpose or who act indifferent are part of the problem.

Theon found a young girl six years ago on the edge of the desert. He nursed the fourteen year old girl back to health and taught her to survive. When she turned 20 the pair fell in love and became inseparable bandits. They left the desert and moved to a city of wizards. There he witnessed a skirmish between wizards and angels. Angels, deeming the black arts dangerous, decimated the research academy despite evidence of their magic protecting people. His love perished in the crossfire.

Theon, a harsh critic, an older man, and one who believes actions resounds more than words has become a wanderer. He is a defender of those who try to survive but are oppressed.
Okay, I'll have a think about it.
 
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