Opinions?[NEW!]
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That Zephyr Guy
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The biggest issue I notice you have with the snouts is the perspective, which is understandable because snouts, like noses, are weird but they're way more prominent and harder to hide.
I did a little bit of work on the nose for you so you can see how the snout could look better, but I encourage you to practice it on your own.
As you can tell, with snouts perspective is a very big deal. Again, they're similar to noses, but also hands. Any small mistake you make on them stick out like a sore thumb. I'll try to explain each thing I circled more in depth here:
The nostril and the tooth: This is just a small perspective issue. sometimes it helps to draw a guideline for the snout itself so that you can get the details on it right. Otherwise it might, in bad cases, look like the character has a broken snout.
The bend: Snouts don't normally bend. Even on smaller snouts, they're generally an elongation of the face rather than a protrusion of it. Try not to think of it as a nose (even if they are similar), try to think of it as another big part of the face.
Facial extension: Like I said before, snouts are more of an elongation and less of protrusion. This also effects other parts of the face, and in general makes the sides of the face seem more "broad" for lack of a better term.
I wouldn't normally outright alter someone else's picture if I didn't think it wouldn't help them and I feel kind of bad about it, but it's to help show you what I mean from before.
Hope this helps c:
I did a little bit of work on the nose for you so you can see how the snout could look better, but I encourage you to practice it on your own.
As you can tell, with snouts perspective is a very big deal. Again, they're similar to noses, but also hands. Any small mistake you make on them stick out like a sore thumb. I'll try to explain each thing I circled more in depth here:
The nostril and the tooth: This is just a small perspective issue. sometimes it helps to draw a guideline for the snout itself so that you can get the details on it right. Otherwise it might, in bad cases, look like the character has a broken snout.
The bend: Snouts don't normally bend. Even on smaller snouts, they're generally an elongation of the face rather than a protrusion of it. Try not to think of it as a nose (even if they are similar), try to think of it as another big part of the face.
Facial extension: Like I said before, snouts are more of an elongation and less of protrusion. This also effects other parts of the face, and in general makes the sides of the face seem more "broad" for lack of a better term.
I wouldn't normally outright alter someone else's picture if I didn't think it wouldn't help them and I feel kind of bad about it, but it's to help show you what I mean from before.
Hope this helps c:
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Looks really good! One thing I would say is that you draw your necks and shoulders very narrow. Even very petite girls should be drawn with shoulders wider than their head, so MTT should def have pretty wide shoulders. Other than that though, it's really good! I would pay maybe 60TBT (only bc im super poor tho lol)??
