Please Critique and Price My Art! ＼(＾▽＾)／

[tobi!]

Norski is a nerd and wants rule 34 of his oc's, that's why he needs a girl oc 8)

But rly, I aint really seen your art all that much but it's lookin' good, especially liking the lines on that last Digital piece in the first post.

u tattletale

if you open a shop for ur digital prints, i'd totes buy. u can help draw my fem oc because i have a good idea of what she'll look like

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I can do boys, too.

i srsly need a girl oc though cause when i post a male ref, people go "yeah...um...no guys"

 

[MC4pros]

u tattletale

if you open a shop for ur digital prints, i'd totes buy. u can help draw my fem oc because i have a good idea of what she'll look like

I don't have a shop for digital art, but you can request a drawing. Just let me know what she looks like, we can decide on a fair price, and I can draw her!

 

[tobi!]

oh geez, i don't have any drawings of her

where would i request?

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that first digital print is so cute btw

is that ur oc?

 

[MC4pros]

oh geez, i don't have any drawings of her

where would i request?

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that first digital print is so cute btw

is that ur oc?

I could try to work from a description. You can VM me the details.
Oh, and thanks~ It's my OC.

 

[roroselle]

Very cute!

I'm not very good at critiquing but I would def pay 300+ TBT

 

[MC4pros]

Very cute!

I'm not very good at critiquing but I would def pay 300+ TBT

wow, really? ; o ;
Thank you~ <33

 

[Jarrad]

they're priceless

but really, they're good. you just need to start drawing faces symmetrically. There are a ton of face guides on youtube and the internet. Use them, and if you already are then stick with them and follow them like the law!

 

[MC4pros]

they're priceless

but really, they're good. you just need to start drawing faces symmetrically. There are a ton of face guides on youtube and the internet. Use them, and if you already are then stick with them and follow them like the law!

thank you ;~; <3
I'll definitely keep that in mind while drawing! Thanks~!

 

[deerui]

up to 1k for full boy traditional
full body digital?? uhh 500-700

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pfft boy i mean body

 

[MC4pros]

up to 1k for full boy traditional
full body digital?? uhh 500-700

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pfft boy i mean body

whoa! o.o really?!
You think my art is really worth that much?
Wow, that means a lot to me~ Thank you! ;~;

 

[MC4pros]

Bump ~

 

[MayorGong]

Your art its amazing ; 3 ; (I fell in love especially with the traditional x3 )
I'm bad with prices but around 300tbt - 500tbt?

 

[MC4pros]

Your art its amazing ; 3 ; (I fell in love especially with the traditional x3 )
I'm bad with prices but around 300tbt - 500tbt?

Oh, wow, thank you!!<33

 

[MC4pros]

Bump ~ c:

 

[Chibi.Hoshi]

Ah, I like your traditional art a lot, digital art needs some work but I am terrible at feedback </3

 

[TeruTeruBozu]

gosh your art is cute @ a @
I really love your coloring-- especially the traditional coloring; I can't color traditionally to save my life lllorz

I noticed that you tried to vary the line width with the first traditional art, however the lines in your art are very stiff; thinner lines like in the 2nd trad. artwork are much more appealing. You should also begin to shift a bit more focus towards anatomy; chibis are super-deformed, but they still have certain parts/proportions that are important, and honestly, studying proportions early on before you pick up any bad habits is waaay easier than studying it mid-way and trying to fix your habits-- trust me DX

My biggest suggestion would be to try more complex poses! It makes art much more interesting to look at when the character isn't just standing still or only facing forward.

In terms of pricing, I- I have no idea llllorz I'm pretty new so I really shouldn't be pricing anything xD

 

[MC4pros]

Ah, I like your traditional art a lot, digital art needs some work but I am terrible at feedback </3

Ahh, thanks, Chibi! ^.^ <3 I wish my art was perf like yours! I suck at digital ;A; I hope to get better like you~ still starting out

gosh your art is cute @ a @
I really love your coloring-- especially the traditional coloring; I can't color traditionally to save my life lllorz

I noticed that you tried to vary the line width with the first traditional art, however the lines in your art are very stiff; thinner lines like in the 2nd trad. artwork are much more appealing. You should also begin to shift a bit more focus towards anatomy; chibis are super-deformed, but they still have certain parts/proportions that are important, and honestly, studying proportions early on before you pick up any bad habits is waaay easier than studying it mid-way and trying to fix your habits-- trust me DX

My biggest suggestion would be to try more complex poses! It makes art much more interesting to look at when the character isn't just standing still or only facing forward.

In terms of pricing, I- I have no idea llllorz I'm pretty new so I really shouldn't be pricing anything xD

So many tips~ this helps so much!! Thank you!! The second traditional drawing is actually supposed to have stiff, thin libes! I was experimenting with using no line weight and trying different eye styles! I guess it doesn't look too good Dx

Oh, and all my examples are actually OC refs, so I refrained from making it too complicated by adding complex poses~ I'm still working on poses and proportions. I suck at anatomy. I'd appreciate if you could tell me what I need to work on specifically for anatomy.

Thanks!! C:

 

[Katelyn]

Okay, I'm not here to critique or anything. I just wanted to say YOU HAVE IMPROVED SOOO MUCH SINCE THE FIRST TIME YOU DREW FOR ME xD Seriously, keep up the good work. I absolutely love your art >w<

 

[MC4pros]

Okay, I'm not here to critique or anything. I just wanted to say YOU HAVE IMPROVED SOOO MUCH SINCE THE FIRST TIME YOU DREW FOR ME xD Seriously, keep up the good work. I absolutely love your art >w<

Ahhh, thank you! >w< I remember making my first digital art for you! I was so bad back then! XD

 

[Finnian]

Work on anatomy? I'm so bad at wording these things out. Here's a redline?

Open bodies are more fun to look at, so i suggest opening up the torso.
Uhhh. figure out your anatomy before you put on clothes.
Look at irl pictures and stuff to figure out folds and how clothes flow?
And pratice non-stop b/c nothing will get you better i you don't work on it!

I really love your art though. The eyes are so cute and your chibis are beyond adorable.