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Yo.
I pretty much just started this to practise for my storyline coursework for college, and given you're all such *cough* fine *cough* individuals I decided to post it here for feedback. Now, before you rant ''WHERES THE GODDAMN DIALOGUE? WHY'S IT SO CHOPPY?" Etc. It's only meant to be a few pages and not contain dialogue, the dialogue has do be done like a full on script (Sucks B| ). So, here I go with what I think should've happened after Megaman Battle Network 6. Instead of the ******** ''AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER'' Bull****.
I pretty much just started this to practise for my storyline coursework for college, and given you're all such *cough* fine *cough* individuals I decided to post it here for feedback. Now, before you rant ''WHERES THE GODDAMN DIALOGUE? WHY'S IT SO CHOPPY?" Etc. It's only meant to be a few pages and not contain dialogue, the dialogue has do be done like a full on script (Sucks B| ). So, here I go with what I think should've happened after Megaman Battle Network 6. Instead of the ******** ''AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER'' Bull****.
Megaman Battle Network 7 - Omega
Written by Aeri Tyaelaria
Written by Aeri Tyaelaria
The year is 20xx, the world is in harmony with the sudden expansion of the net. Everyone is now connected to what's happening in the world, people go onto the net by PErsonal Terminals, or PETs. These PETs contain NetNavis, a program with it's own personality and thoughts, made to perform tasks for humans and be able to go onto the net to gain things quickly. With the recent invention of 'Copy bots' these NetNavis are now able to walk among us, helping mankind futher and excelling it into a new age of technology and wonder. With NetNavis people can 'NetBattle', linking up to test their strength or 'delete' each others Navis.
In some ways Navis are just like humans and just like humans...There are good and bad ones....
'RRRR! RRRR! RRRR!'
"LAN!! YOU CAN'T NAP NOW!! THIS IS CYBER ACADEMY!! GET UP BEFORE THE TEACHER SPOTS YOU!" said the PET on the desk at the back of the class, buzzing to wake it's slumbering owner. The bandana clad head slowly rose from the pillow which was it's arms, rubbing it's eyes and looking down at the PET, the face of his NetNavi glaring at him as it began to nag at him. Lan ruffled his brown hair, retorting he was merely 'resting his eyes', causing the NetNavi to grumble darkly and continue listening to the teacher, who was apperently none the wiser. Lan sighed, before looking around the class. There were fewer girls than usual, only a couple to the many boys who populated the class. The boy sat next to him was talking to his NetNavi, trying to work out what the teacher was talking about, the rest of the class had their eyes fixed on the board, which showed diagrams of 'Virus Busting'. Lan blinked lazily, he'd virus busted since grade 1, why did he need another lesson? Even if viruses recently had become stronger and harder to beat. As Lan leant his head down to go back to his nap the teacher called for attention, causing him to jump upright.
The teacher pointed at the board, explaining the basics of Virus busting to the class, before asking them to 'Jack in', the class picked up their PETs and connected them to their desks, making the NetNavi's within them go into the netbased area which was the classroom. Lan lazily picked up his PET, giving a word of encouragement to his blue NetNavi which he called 'Megaman', before plugging the cable into the appropriate port on the desk, giving his signiture catchphrase as he did.
After a few seconds the Blue Netnavi was on the net area of the Classroom, surronded by standard green and purple NetNavis, the cheaper models. Two NetNavi's however were not standard, they were customised just like Megaman, one was carrying a pair of bombs and had a bomb for a body, two legs and arms and the head poked out a little, the other was orange in colour and seemed to be made of lava or magma, whatever he was made of it caused the NetNavis around him to move away due to the heat.
As the NetNavis looked at each other a final NetNavi jacked in, an orange navi with a visor which had an antenne, these navis usually were officials. The Navi called for attention before explaining what was about to happen, patting the box beside him he told the other navis that there was a virus inside and he wished for a volunteer to show the class how to delete a virus. Some of the Navis kept quiet, it seemed the only people willing to volunteer were the customised navis.
After a few moments the teacher's NetNavi pointed to Megaman, asking for the class to give him room to battle, as they stepped back Megaman walked to be infront of the box with some distance, getting himself ready to battle he spoke to Lan, asking him to get his 'battle chips' ready. After the quick download the Teacher opened the box, a small set of viruses popping out. They were like little black blobs with two yellow feet, a yellow mining hat covering their bodies and weilding a pickaxe. These were a common and weak virus called a 'Mettaur' after only a few moments of being released it charged at Megaman and the battle began.
(I'll continue later)
Comments?
In some ways Navis are just like humans and just like humans...There are good and bad ones....
'RRRR! RRRR! RRRR!'
"LAN!! YOU CAN'T NAP NOW!! THIS IS CYBER ACADEMY!! GET UP BEFORE THE TEACHER SPOTS YOU!" said the PET on the desk at the back of the class, buzzing to wake it's slumbering owner. The bandana clad head slowly rose from the pillow which was it's arms, rubbing it's eyes and looking down at the PET, the face of his NetNavi glaring at him as it began to nag at him. Lan ruffled his brown hair, retorting he was merely 'resting his eyes', causing the NetNavi to grumble darkly and continue listening to the teacher, who was apperently none the wiser. Lan sighed, before looking around the class. There were fewer girls than usual, only a couple to the many boys who populated the class. The boy sat next to him was talking to his NetNavi, trying to work out what the teacher was talking about, the rest of the class had their eyes fixed on the board, which showed diagrams of 'Virus Busting'. Lan blinked lazily, he'd virus busted since grade 1, why did he need another lesson? Even if viruses recently had become stronger and harder to beat. As Lan leant his head down to go back to his nap the teacher called for attention, causing him to jump upright.
The teacher pointed at the board, explaining the basics of Virus busting to the class, before asking them to 'Jack in', the class picked up their PETs and connected them to their desks, making the NetNavi's within them go into the netbased area which was the classroom. Lan lazily picked up his PET, giving a word of encouragement to his blue NetNavi which he called 'Megaman', before plugging the cable into the appropriate port on the desk, giving his signiture catchphrase as he did.
After a few seconds the Blue Netnavi was on the net area of the Classroom, surronded by standard green and purple NetNavis, the cheaper models. Two NetNavi's however were not standard, they were customised just like Megaman, one was carrying a pair of bombs and had a bomb for a body, two legs and arms and the head poked out a little, the other was orange in colour and seemed to be made of lava or magma, whatever he was made of it caused the NetNavis around him to move away due to the heat.
As the NetNavis looked at each other a final NetNavi jacked in, an orange navi with a visor which had an antenne, these navis usually were officials. The Navi called for attention before explaining what was about to happen, patting the box beside him he told the other navis that there was a virus inside and he wished for a volunteer to show the class how to delete a virus. Some of the Navis kept quiet, it seemed the only people willing to volunteer were the customised navis.
After a few moments the teacher's NetNavi pointed to Megaman, asking for the class to give him room to battle, as they stepped back Megaman walked to be infront of the box with some distance, getting himself ready to battle he spoke to Lan, asking him to get his 'battle chips' ready. After the quick download the Teacher opened the box, a small set of viruses popping out. They were like little black blobs with two yellow feet, a yellow mining hat covering their bodies and weilding a pickaxe. These were a common and weak virus called a 'Mettaur' after only a few moments of being released it charged at Megaman and the battle began.
(I'll continue later)
Comments?
