Practising.

[Psychonaut]

What the hell are people saying about too many fancy words? The fanciest word I read was harmony..

i didn't read it
LOL

 

[Vex L'Cour]

i didn't read it
LOL

Again, don't comment on the work if you dont read it.

 

[Psychonaut]

Again, don't comment on the work if you dont read it.

posting in order to give you my opinion/criticism. if you're serious about writing, you need to have lots of criticism in order to learn your style, and to hone it. this is my input. there will be others who say things, as well.

lol4char

 

[Vex L'Cour]

lol4char

lol@youstillbeinganidiot.

You can't input on someones writing if you don't read it, or at the least your giving a very blind (and stupid) input. It's like you showing me a drawing and me closing my eyes and saying "It's ****". How is my input valid when I have yet to look at it?

 

[Psychonaut]

lol@youstillbeinganidiot.

You can't input on someones writing if you don't read it, or at the least your giving a very blind (and stupid) input. It's like you showing me a drawing and me closing my eyes and saying "It's ****". How is my input valid when I have yet to look at it?

JESUS CHRIST I WAS TRYING TO HELP YOU Y U SO MAD LOL

i input on it based on another's input. very secondhand, i know, but it's still input and a valid point to be made, whether or not you necessarily need it right now. over-detailing things leads to longwinded sentences and paragraphs that simply don't need to be there, which throws off the reader. a dozen $10 words compared to 2 simple words that do the same thing is going to alienate the audience who is too lazy to know/look them up.

the only point i was trying to make is that regardless of what you wrote right now, if it's fancy (which this was already commented on being), it's going to go over people's heads and make you look like an arrogant ass. TRYING TO HELP YOU, GOD.

 

[Vex L'Cour]

JESUS CHRIST I WAS TRYING TO HELP YOU Y U SO MAD LOL

i input on it based on another's input. very secondhand, i know, but it's still input and a valid point to be made, whether or not you necessarily need it right now. over-detailing things leads to longwinded sentences and paragraphs that simply don't need to be there, which throws off the reader. a dozen $10 words compared to 2 simple words that do the same thing is going to alienate the audience who is too lazy to know/look them up.

the only point i was trying to make is that regardless of what you wrote right now, if it's fancy (which this was already commented on being), it's going to go over people's heads and make you look like an arrogant ass. TRYING TO HELP YOU, GOD.

Love you really Psychonaut -hugs-