Price my terrible art!

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Her body seems to be facing forward, while her head is off center so the angle looks funky :) Aside from that, I'd say it's pretty good!

I was drawing of the reference image Kirin had for me. Her hands are there :)

Copying poses isn't exactly a good idea... I've never really understood people who do that. No point commissioning someone if they're just gonna draw the exact same pic I provided as a ref haha xD

Chibi anatomy however, is a bit touchy... since chibis by definition have exaggerated features. However, you should study how other artists balance their pieces. For example, legs are typically thicker than arms, so that should be so in chibis as well.

I'm no good with pricing so I'm not even gonna bother lol

Hope this helps!

EDIT: so many typos lol
 
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15 tbt, I don't think RLC is an option right now. The lines need to be improved with detailing but I'm just repeating what others are saying.
 
The three lines on the left side of her fringe (or is it called bang? idk) is a little distracting since there's no detail shown in the right side. It also obscures the highlights as well.

As for the rest of the hair, the details of the locks looks nice! Though it's little odd that despite your character in a stationary pose her hair is in an angle where she's appears to be moving when really she's not. Even if there's an imaginary wind to explain the cause her fringe/bang and her dress will also be effected.

I would also say that her head should be aligned with her body but apparently she has no bones so?? Not quite sure what to say on that matter.
 
Her body seems to be facing forward, while her head is off center so the angle looks funky :) Aside from that, I'd say it's pretty good!



Copying poses isn't exactly a good idea... I've never really understood people who do that. No point commissioning someone if they're just gonna draw the exact same pic I provided as a ref haha xD

Chibi anatomy however, is a bit touchy... since chibis by definition have exaggerated features. However, you should study how other artists balance their pieces. For example, legs are typically thicker than arms, so that should be so in chibis as well.

I'm no good with pricing so I'm not even gonna bother lol

Hope this helps!

EDIT: so many typos lol
Thanks for the input! I was trying to draw her like that just so I could practice~
 
10 BTB

As for RLC right now they are not exactly good enough yet to be sold for RLC, I mean they aren't too bad they just need some more work.

Also no offense, her head looks like it's going to fall or is trying to escape her body.
 
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You need to practice a bit more before even starting a shop or even thinking about prices atm. I mean it's good but I wouldn't buy it till you improve. You're better off doing freebies till the meantime.
 
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Maybe around 25 btb? You're good at art, but I would try doing some freebies first. I'm picky, but I wouldn't buy it. Maybe also try switching programs. The resolution is poor and the background is white instead of transparent. I highly recommend FireAlpaca.
 
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I use the TBT uploaded e.e
I've noticed that when you upload images through TBT the resolution tends to drop. While it's fine to use that method I wouldn't personally recommend it. Additionally saving it as a .jpg file also reduces resolution quality as it compresses colour information rather than retaining said information. Because of that I would save it as .png instead and upload either from my Photobucket account or my dA stash. You can also find uploading sites that doesn't require registration such as Imgur for example.
 
Mhm, it usually does.
Anyway, here is my latest one, commision for Kirindrake:
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maybe shift the head a bit? I would say 25-50 tbt tbh. Other then head, looks pretty decent. Would practice alot more to start for RLC.
 
I think you need to work a bit on choosing colours, and not using pillow shading; as well as what people have mentioned previously. Other than that it's a pretty good start. Maybe like 15btb.
 
yeah the head needs to be set in the middle of the neck and the ahir doesn' look right

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15 to 20 tbt
 
As others are saying, I think RLC is a bit too early for you right now. The chibi isn't terrible by any means but it definitely needs some improvement. I hate to repeat whats others are saying but the head needs to be positioned in the middle of the neck otherwise it's going to look a bit off. That being said, the proportions are a bit uneven. The coloring is also a bit flat so I would also recommend playing with more colors and would look up tutorials on shading and color contrast to make things "pop" (if that's what you're going for), I guess. I apologize if I sounded a bit harsh but those are some pointers I have. You have a lot potential so keep practicing.

However, if you were to sell those right now, I'd probably recommend somewhere between 10-15 tbt. Though like others said, I recommend doing freebies for a while.
 
Thank you all for opinions! I'm gonna request this to be closed now, as attempts to sell in my pixel shop has gone well!
 
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