like 4/10 (sorry) the last line is hilarious though
not a big fan of text-only sigs , maybe a lil pixel or transparent img to accent it or turning the text into an image would be better? just a suggestion lol, i could also prolly help but, to each their own!
9/10 good art/composition , would be a solid 10 if the style kabuki was drawn was in a similar edo-period style as the kanagawa wave, rather than a cartoony style. the neon pink was also pretty much never seen then
also there finally is something to see there so that line isnt needed : P