Rates on this one, pls.

[muffun]

[n,Nov 8 2009, 11:56:56 AM]

Is the text any better? I'm trying to get it just right :/

I liked first text better...

Okay

Some people don't like the first text and some people do, sooo...
:huh:

I think it was cool that you had floating rocks (right side) on the first one
But on the new one, you made it so the rocks made a pillar or something.
In my opinion, splice that piller in 2.
It makes it give more of a 'power surge' feeling

Actually, I just darkened the rocks on the right side in the first version so it would look like they were floating. ^_^

 

[NikoKing]

Another Tip: Some effects need some sharpening to them, not a lot but some.