Shiny's Story Corner

[ShinyDungeoneer]

I'm working on writing a story! I've had the Prologue written since last year, but never got past that point due to writers block. I'm currently working on Chapter 1 of the story, which I have named The Flames of Revenge. It's being written on a Google Document, since I don't have any paper on me. Any and all critiques and bits of advice are welcome. I'll link the story below:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AC57fWAnIw5ZuCZ8_nWnbvvZnarg6xdP04rFM76Q6ZI/edit

I look forward to your reactions!

 

[ShinyDungeoneer]

bumping this because I finished chapter 1 and am now writing chapter 2! (writing a book is hard)