🌼 Starting to post my art. opinions? 🌼

[JoeTheNarwhal]

hi. so here is was i made. it took forever because i didn't know what i wanted to draw but.
here.

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i should have outlined it darker but oh well.
opinions please?​

 

[Mariah]

It's too light. I can hardly see it.

 

[Shirohibiki]

i think its cute! <3 just need some darker lines so its easier to see uvu

 

[Susan]

Your art is cute! A little darker lines, and perfect! )

 

[RebeccaShay]

Way too light

 

[Peebers]

It's really light! Have darker lines, or a darker skin color or hair color.

Also, since the skin is really pale and close to white, having it on a white background doesn't help.