Summer Nights

[Tyler]

Bacon Boy posted his Smash Camp poem. Here's mine. C&C

The epilogue of day and overture
of the night. Depressing, yet romantic,
she fades until the morning. I nurture
the end of a day and end all antics.

Retiring to my abode, running to
my desk, to return to my love. Not our
sun, but something as beautiful for two
of us: A picture in our first hour.

Your delightful brown optics, unworthy
of the night. I will see neither of my
loves until morn

 

[Sinep1]

Awesome work OCM! : D

 

[-C*-]

Much better.

This is enjoyable, as opposed to the alternative.

 

[Sarah]

Nice poem.

 

[Robin]

Awesome poem.

 

[melly]

beautifully written, I wish I was that girl XD
did you use a theasurus?

 

[Princess]

Very nice[

Good luck!

 

[Tyler]

beautifully written, I wish I was that girl XD
did you use a theasurus?

I had to. Because it's a sonnet, each line can only have 10 syllables.

And I got 2nd place in the contest.

 

[AndyB]

beautifully written, I wish I was that girl XD
did you use a theasurus?

I had to. Because it's a sonnet, each line can only have 10 syllables.

And I got 2nd place in the contest.

That's awesome.
Well done Odd.

 

[Bacon Boy]

beautifully written, I wish I was that girl XD
did you use a theasurus?

I had to. Because it's a sonnet, each line can only have 10 syllables.

And I got 2nd place in the contest.

Nice! Ugh, I dislike sonnets. They're my least favorite, but you pulled this off superbly.

 

[Tyler]

beautifully written, I wish I was that girl XD
did you use a theasurus?

I had to. Because it's a sonnet, each line can only have 10 syllables.

And I got 2nd place in the contest.

Nice! Ugh, I dislike sonnets. They're my least favorite, but you pulled this off superbly.

Hm...

I like them because it helps to give the poem structure and allows them to flow nicer. At least that's why I like them.

 

[kalinn]

wow 2nd place?
congrats!

 

[Phoenix Days]

awesome poem. im not that good at writing.

 

[technoxmaniac]

Sweet poem.