The Legend of Zelda: Viliatris Strikes

[Mino]

Hmm... This should be interesting...

 

[Bulerias]

Hmm... This should be interesting...

Oh, it will be. I've got a whole plot-line already built, and I drew a map of my version of Hyrule.

 

[Bulerias]

And, I'm almost finished with Chapter 6!

 

[Bulerias]

Chapter 6

 

[Mino]

You should post this at NSider... It's really good. :yes:

 

[Mino]

Oh, by the way, you need to indent every time someone new talks.


Just thought that'd help.

 

[Bastoise99]

Nice chapter! I agree with mino, this needs to go on Nsider. I liked it when you talked about the theif in the beginning., That had good detail in it.

 

[Mino]

It's better than 95% of the crap there anyway.

 

[Bulerias]

Oh, by the way, you need to indent every time someone new talks.


Just thought that'd help.

What exactly do you mean?

 

[THE_AUSTRAILIAN_GUY]

It is somthing that writers do they do that one reason so you don't have to say so and so said. It makes it look better, and a better read, and makes it look longer


:wub:

 

[Bulerias]

It is somthing that writers do they do that one reason so you don't have to say so and so said. It makes it look better, and a better read, and makes it look longer


:wub:

I think I understand... I'll do that next chapter.

 

[Bulerias]

OK everybody, I'm making Chapter 7 by request. Do you want more story, or more action in Chpater 7?

 

[Bastoise99]

More of everything.

 

[Bulerias]

More of everything.

OK, I'll try to extend, deepen, and at action to the story in Chapter 7!

 

[Bulerias]

Looks like my only readers are PIKMIN042, BASTOISE99, and THE_AUSTRALIAN_GUY...


-_-

I need more readers!

 

[Bulerias]

Chapter 7

 

[Mino]

Like this:

"Hello, I like cheese... Do you like cheese? I like cheese a lot... It's my favorite vegetable," said George, "I think they should make cheese with holes in it and maybe chees shaped in a large wedge."
"That's interesting." said Bobby.

 

[Bulerias]

Like this:

"Hello, I like cheese... Do you like cheese? I like cheese a lot... It's my favorite vegetable," said George, "I think they should make cheese with holes in it and maybe chees shaped in a large wedge."
"That's interesting." said Bobby.

Oh.... well, I'll try and do that next chapter. So, did you like Chapter 7? Comments?

 

[Bastoise99]

That was good! I liked how you illustrated the battle. The dialogue was good too.

 

[Bulerias]

That was good! I liked how you illustrated the battle. The dialogue was good too.

Thank you! And I left a quetion at the end... who is the master of the Dark Land?... h43r: