Banned because I have a horror piece that's two chapters so far.
The "You're Banned" Game
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Banned because I have a horror piece that's two chapters so far.
Banned because tell me, why is it that you write stories?
Banned because oh, uh... I have no idea... I've been writing for as long as I know. It's in my blood to write and I enjoy it too. ^w^
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It's a hobby of yours? ^^
Banned because yeah, yeah, it is! Writing is to me what drawing is to artists~
Banned because oh okay I understand. Also maybe there's someone there *that can help us out. (Silhouette, Chapter 1 paragraph 21)
Banned because lmc. >.<
Banned because let me correct?
Banned because "let me check" and... thanks for catching that!
Banned because I've never heard of lmc before. Also in paragraph 25 it's shoot not shot. You're welcome.
Banned because I'll go check on that one too... >.<
Banned because I know why you use correct grammar when talking to people, because you write stories.
Banned because I know why you use correct grammar when talking to people, because you write stories.
Banned for figuring that out just now... oh, and thanks for catching that second error! I think I might go through and edit my early chapters tonight.
Banned because do you not proofread your chapters?
Banned because I do but it's been a few months since I wrote them so I have a fresher perspective. Plus, I want to edit not just for grammar but also story consistency.
Banned because I don't have any knowledge on story consistency so I can't help you there.
Banned because don't worry. I can handle that much.
Banned because when did you write Silhouette?
Banned because I started writing it in... March, I believe.
Banned because what do you mean by a fresher perspective? In paragraph 37 there doesn't need to be a comma after here.