Two kawaii whatevers that need critique/pricing

[axo]

I've been working a lot on my drawing skills, I made a linerart for myself to use as a base. I've experimented with changing the pose but I like this pose best. Is this ready for selling, if not what critiques do you have?

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[Mega_Cabbage]

They could probably sell for 25-50 tbt, but I would work on them more before selling. They aren't that unique to each other considering you use a base, so I would work on making more dynamic expressions, poses, shading and styles. Pretty much defining the little details like hair strands/flow (the hair is too stiff and flat), wrinkles in clothing, fingers, eye shapes would be a good start.

 

[Llust]

i'd pay around 40 tbt. they look great, although i'd touch it up with shading, lighting and possibly more detail (i.e. more of a texture/shine in the eyes, wrinkles in the clothing & add a tint of blush on the cheeks if you want it to look cuter. i suggest moving up the knee cap a little or adding more length below the knee cap, it doesnt look right to me anatomy wise. as mega_cabbage already mentioned, the hair is too stiff. hair should flow naturally and every patch should sway in a different direction (unless of course you want her to have absolute straight hair, then i'd just recommend having some of the outer layers stick out a little). i recommend looking up tutorials on dA to get a better concept on drawing hair as well as the other things like coloring eyes, clothing wrinkles, etc

 

[Locket]

I love how you took the advice, the hips, and the hair. NOw make eye color and shine, work on shading.

 

[Rasha]

cute (I like the style) but too simple. try adding a bit more detail + lighting and shading so they would look good enough for selling
right now I say they're worth 10-15 btb

 

[axo]

I have a new one with a different facial expression and pose. I accentuated the waistline a bit more and tried some shading on the hair. I don't like the outfit as much as the other ones, though.

 

[axo]

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