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Astral Inner Planet Floating Gold #10
Dolce
Still a WIP, but rate it from 1-10 and feedback, what should i fix, what u like about it
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Firstly, I want to say that your map and time is perfect! I also really like that the items you picked out for the visitors, especially the dress ≧◡≦.

I really like the area below the town tree, the petal paths, clovers and carnations. However, it would be better if the trees were not in this pattern: xoxoxoxo. Also it would be better if the flowers were of more variety.

Your Zen and camping area is perfect, all the PWPs are aligned so nicely. I find the scarecrow a good pwp but it doesn't fit there honestly. The campsite was in the best area it could be for the town ≧◡≦. There is also a random yellow rose below the diving sign :eek:

Right below the town hall is the best area of your town. The fairy streetlights, the flower arch, the Ruby and the sapphire match so well together :eek: The park is very visually striking with the symmetry :) Also the area above the town hall could be made better by cedar trees, since it is the north of your town.

I'm speechless for the topiary park :eek:. I never thought or saw that idea, all square topiaries surrounding one large circle topiary
(╯3╰). The tulip topiary was great aswell.

You have a skill for picking where permanent PWPs should go, the Caf? was perfect! Instead of the Wisteria Trellis, I think it could be better by two wooden benches, 5 squares below the edges of the Cafe.

The map is excellent, it's perfect how the train station, a dent in the river and the town plaza are all perfectly aligned
(n˘v˘•)?. Also you have a small strip of land above the river, which is always the best spot for villager houses.

I love the Re-Tail area! But the tree placement makes it look so unnatural. I also like to put a garbage can pwp near my Re-Tail.
I went inside Maple's house and it was so well designed! All the furniture placements are very well thought of and planned. But, the walls and flooring don't match the furniture and music could have been added to block the brewsteroid's creepy hoots. I would eat from Maple's cafeteria!

In the south-east area of your town, there are grave paths. What do they mean?

Marcus' house area is phenomenal. His clothes are adorable ★~(◠△◕✿). I visited your house and it's very creative and adorable! However, all the colours from the mermaid furniture blended too much with the carpet and flooring. Ruby's princess bedroom is a room truly fit for a princess, adorable!

Overall, I think this town deserves a 10. It's one of the best towns I ever visited, Dolce sets a really high standard for other dream towns ★~(◠△⊙✿).
 
Firstly, I want to say that your map and time is perfect! I also really like that the items you picked out for the visitors, especially the dress ≧◡≦.

I really like the area below the town tree, the petal paths, clovers and carnations. However, it would be better if the trees were not in this pattern: xoxoxoxo. Also it would be better if the flowers were of more variety.

Your Zen and camping area is perfect, all the PWPs are aligned so nicely. I find the scarecrow a good pwp but it doesn't fit there honestly. The campsite was in the best area it could be for the town ≧◡≦. There is also a random yellow rose below the diving sign :eek:

Right below the town hall is the best area of your town. The fairy streetlights, the flower arch, the Ruby and the sapphire match so well together :eek: The park is very visually striking with the symmetry :) Also the area above the town hall could be made better by cedar trees, since it is the north of your town.

I'm speechless for the topiary park :eek:. I never thought or saw that idea, all square topiaries surrounding one large circle topiary
(╯3╰). The tulip topiary was great aswell.

You have a skill for picking where permanent PWPs should go, the Caf? was perfect! Instead of the Wisteria Trellis, I think it could be better by two wooden benches, 5 squares below the edges of the Cafe.

The map is excellent, it's perfect how the train station, a dent in the river and the town plaza are all perfectly aligned
(n˘v˘•)?. Also you have a small strip of land above the river, which is always the best spot for villager houses.

I love the Re-Tail area! But the tree placement makes it look so unnatural. I also like to put a garbage can pwp near my Re-Tail.
I went inside Maple's house and it was so well designed! All the furniture placements are very well thought of and planned. But, the walls and flooring don't match the furniture and music could have been added to block the brewsteroid's creepy hoots. I would eat from Maple's cafeteria!

In the south-east area of your town, there are grave paths. What do they mean?

Marcus' house area is phenomenal. His clothes are adorable ★~(◠△◕✿). I visited your house and it's very creative and adorable! However, all the colours from the mermaid furniture blended too much with the carpet and flooring. Ruby's princess bedroom is a room truly fit for a princess, adorable!

Overall, I think this town deserves a 10. It's one of the best towns I ever visited, Dolce sets a really high standard for other dream towns ★~(◠△⊙✿).
awwww <3 your too kind! thanks for the great honest review ! oh no i forgot to remove that yellow rose T-T,
 
Your town is absolutely beautiful and definitely an inspiration. I'll be dreaming of it more than once to get some ideas for my own town!

I especially love the PWP placement, your map, your villager placement, and your paths/foliage. The only flaw in the flora, which has already been pointed out, is the yellow rose at the bottom of the map. But otherwise, everything is pristine and adorable.

Also, Maple's house is one of the best houses I've ever visited.

I wish that I could tell you some flaws, but there really aren't many. This town is amazing and the time + effort you must have put into making it is clearly shown!
 
Your town is absolutely beautiful and definitely an inspiration. I'll be dreaming of it more than once to get some ideas for my own town!

I especially love the PWP placement, your map, your villager placement, and your paths/foliage. The only flaw in the flora, which has already been pointed out, is the yellow rose at the bottom of the map. But otherwise, everything is pristine and adorable.

Also, Maple's house is one of the best houses I've ever visited.

I wish that I could tell you some flaws, but there really aren't many. This town is amazing and the time + effort you must have put into making it is clearly shown!
Awww thank u <3

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this is so annoying. I really like seeing individual threads for dream addresses.

I am also visiting right now.
Yeah it's so spammed :)
 
I loved it!

Its so effortlessly pretty and adorable. I love all the details like the stumps behind the cafe and the little cemetery. All the pwps are nicely placed, the map and path is very organized.

The only cons would be that it gets a little crowded...something about the bushes makes it hard to walk and there are a lot of single paths.
 
I loved it!

Its so effortlessly pretty and adorable. I love all the details like the stumps behind the cafe and the little cemetery. All the pwps are nicely placed, the map and path is very organized.

The only cons would be that it gets a little crowded...something about the bushes makes it hard to walk and there are a lot of single paths.

thank u <3 yeah i see what you mean, i got really tired on thinking on what to put there in those areas, so i just out bushes, and the spaces are very thin so i had to have 1 path areas T-T
 
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I'm not exactly good at rating other peoples towns so I don't really have much to say but I'm a sucker for symmetry so I definitely looove how your most of the things in your town is symmetrical! Your PWPs placement is also A+

I also agree with the flower arrangement but it's definitely not something that bothers me too much. All in all, your town is very well laid out and I can see you've placed in a hella lot of effort on it! It's beautiful! :)

10/10, I love your town and I took a bunch of screenshots (for dream diary) :D
 
I'm not exactly good at rating other peoples towns so I don't really have much to say but I'm a sucker for symmetry so I definitely looove how your most of the things in your town is symmetrical! Your PWPs placement is also A+

I also agree with the flower arrangement but it's definitely not something that bothers me too much. All in all, your town is very well laid out and I can see you've placed in a hella lot of effort on it! It's beautiful! :)

10/10, I love your town and I took a bunch of screenshots (for dream diary) :D
awwww <3 thank uu so much ! i love symmetry to, even when i had a nature town, i still had to have symmetry.

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I'm visiting right now! I'll tell you what I think of it. :D
ok <3
 
Haha! I can't even go in depth! This town is absolutely incredible! 15/10! I really have no Idea what to say. This town is so amazing. Everything is aligned, beautifully pink, and is just generally good. How did you get this many Carnations and clovers, and how did you get such a nice layout?! :D
 
aww thanks <3 i map resetted and bought them and my friend gave me tons :)
 
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