Wattpad Book Thingies!

[himeki]

So, it's the weekend, and I would like something to read!
I am offering Semi-Free reviews!
What am I giving?

• A Star on one chapter to show that I have read it
• A detailed review posted here, and also a comment

What would I like in exchange?

• A read of my book,The Peculiar Occurrences of the Girl and her Platinum Key and a star on at least one chapter to prove you have read it!
• A comment. Nothing mean, but please do not say anything related to this thread, such as "Hi this is XYZ from TBT please review!"
• That's all I ask

Rules

• I will only review the title once I see that my novel has been read!
• NOTHING NSFW. Hints are fine, but nothing you wouldn't want your grandmother to read!
• I'd rather not read 1D fanfics, and if it is a fanfiction, please specify what it is from!

So, simply enter this form in, and I will read it!

[B]Wattpad Username:[/B] 
[B]Genre of Book:[/B]
[B]Book Title:[/B]
[B]Chapters:[/B]
[B]Short Description:[/B]
[B]Have you read my book yet?:[/B]
[B]If yes, what is your opinion on it?:[/B]

Thank you for checking my thread out!

 

[himeki]

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[himeki]

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[himeki]

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[himeki]

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[Cherry Kisses]

I'll do that when I finish the first chapter of my new book. Could you possibly read two books of mine (they're short)?

 

[himeki]

Yes, of course! Fill out the forms

 

[Cherry Kisses]

Wattpad Username: libbyjane130
Genre of Book:Fanfiction
Chapters: Seven
Short Description: Jade's always lived on the outside. Most 14 year olds wear glittery earrings an obsess over 1D, not have angelbites and cry over MCR. But then Dan and Phil Howell-Lester come and sweep her away from the harsh adoption home she lives in. Will Jade be the perfect daughter or cause trouble?
Have you read my book yet?:I've read the prologue and Chapter 1
If yes, what is your opinion on it?: It actually looks really good!
It's called Emo Trash btw

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Just do one for now x

 

[himeki]

Wattpad Username: libbyjane130
Genre of Book:Fanfiction
Chapters: Seven
Short Description: Jade's always lived on the outside. Most 14 year olds wear glittery earrings an obsess over 1D, not have angelbites and cry over MCR. But then Dan and Phil Howell-Lester come and sweep her away from the harsh adoption home she lives in. Will Jade be the perfect daughter or cause trouble?
Have you read my book yet?:I've read the prologue and Chapter 1
If yes, what is your opinion on it?: It actually looks really good!
It's called Emo Trash btw

Eeep, I forgot to add that on the form! I'll take a look at it later

 

[Cherry Kisses]

Okay x

 

[Pineapple Bacteria]

Okay x

Oh and the fanfic is Danisnotonfire and Amazing Phil

 

[himeki]

Spoiler: Review:EMO TRASH

Well, first and foremost, I'm not a romance reader, so my opinion is greatly biased. I'll try my best here!
For starters, I would have to say the events happen very quickly. First she's here, now here, oh, and now here! In a lot of situations this isn't bad-I'd say this is a mix of the two. A good point about this book, is that even though it is a fanfic, it isn't obvious and could actually stand fine as a story, unique from any other series. Good day to you! I feel like the majority of the characters are nicely developed, but Raven was kind of...eh. He met her suddenly on the bus, suddenly he's having pizza with her...and now he's her girlfriend, but oh no! Later, he's kissing another girl. Sorry to be frank!
I would probably rate this... 8/10.
PROS:
Pretty much nice characters
A good plot in general
CONS:
Raven isn't developed very well
Some events are a bit rushed.
I don't intend to start an argument with this! Keep up the work, and keep developing the story! Good Luck!

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Oh and the fanfic is Danisnotonfire and Amazing Phil

I don't really know these two... ;w;

 

[Cherry Kisses]

Okay, you said I could do two, right? I think my next one is far better.

 

[himeki]

Then, fill out the form again! n.n

 

[Cherry Kisses]

Wattpad Username: libbyjane130
Genre of Book: Random
Book Title: Beauty
Chapters: 1
Short Description:Princess Cheri of Hiro has lived a life of luxury, being the daughter of Queen Grace and King Michael. When her father hires a new live-in maid who has a daughter, Evie, around the same age as Cheri, she sees what it's like to be ordinary.

 

[himeki]

Spoiler: Review:Beauty

This book was quite cute and sweet, but there were a few things I got confused about. For one, I wouldn't expect I princes to have an iPhone and even as play clothes, wear normal clothes, but they can easily be amended. The story was quite short, but it explained everything it needed to. My review will stay short and sweet like this book
PROS:
Nice characters
Short, but sweet!
CONS:
A bit confusing!
VERDICT: 7/10

 

[himeki]

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